Enjoyable read, and definately kept me interested. Both the mens characters were interesting, and the intensity of the situation between the two of them came through well. I am intrigued to see what peters reaction to the strangers request will be, and how the story will develop. Also, the absent fog was a good touch, adding to the mystery and eeriness of this man. Nicely written, I look forward to more :D:D:D be sure to check out my story, A chance encounter, i think you'd like it.
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