This was very well done. The prose written, though imperfect, matched a sense of the human spirit, of seeking that knowledge that must be gleaned through hard experience. The rhyme in these prose, and the rhythm of the poem itself string the chords of my heart, and I will admit, though callous as I have become, I did feel a bit of a lump in my throat at the end. Well done, I will have to read more of your poetry, and begin writing more of my own, you have made me realize that it has been far too long.
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