Enjoyed reading your short story. Contains good prose. You mention a few times that the events happening to the woman doesn't matter. I would want to know why it doesn't matter. Other than that it's good and contains a fair amount of mystery.
Feel free to give a critique on my work Analogy of LIfe.
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