I loved this story. It was very well written. The fact that it was so simple, yet so good, made it even more pleasureable. It also was very descriptive, and had a surprise ending, which is always good. No one likes a story where you know the end right from the begining. Well, great job, and keep it up!
Puffilypuffin
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