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#4822227

Review of We would’ve

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Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was an excellent piece of writing. There was so much heart and soul inside this poem here. A very well written item with a saddness at the end. The sentimental power was immense. A very good poem. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of Alliterative Lime Lollipop

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A very well written poem from you. I liked the childish theme and manner of the poem. The theme was also highly original to me. I wonder what your inspiration was for this poem. I enjoyed the little read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4822221

Review of Dearest Me, Naomi,

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Naomi,

I thought this was a well written piece from you. I admire your creativity and positivity through life. The Lord has taught you well. I enjoyed reading your personal letter very much. I am sure HE is with you every day. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4822211

Review of HOLIDAY THANKFULNESS AND BLESSINGS

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I thought this poem was very well written. The rhymes were great. The meaning of this poem was special and rewarding to read through. There were no distractions that I noted and you did a fine job here. It is always nice to read about Him in poems. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Peace on Earth (2007)

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I thought this was a good item to read through. I liked the tone and manner in how this was written. Written with courage and conviction. Reading about the Lord is always a positive step for me. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of 6/20/2025

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Fact or fiction, I thought this was well written and displayed on the page. To me, there was a nice hint of romantic gestures and quotations. From your thoughts there was a nice and vivid reality here. Like a dreamer wishing to fly high in the sky. I enjoyed reading your words. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of Things i never said

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I thought you expressed your feelings and inner power very well here. A nicely written item to me. I liked the depth of this poem, it was very real and true. I also liked the emotions too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4821835

Review of In the valley of the shadow of death,

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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I liked how much you said in just 140 words, the message was clear and direct. The meaning was very uplifting to me. Isn't the Lord's words an amazing power for us all? ... I loved this piece of writing. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of Untitled (2018)

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I truly loved the philosophical tone and meaning to this little poem. It resonated well with me. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I was inspired by this writing from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Unsent

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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought..

Aww. I really loved the ending of this poem, it was very sweet and warming, humbling too. You have reinvented yourself. A lovely sentimental poem here. It was very special to me. Great emotional writing, be blessed and write on!

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#4821802

Review of You - but different

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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the insight into your ex partner here. You expressed yourself very well to the reader. A simple yet effective poem from you. I enjoyed every word. The title was a match for the writing. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Deep in my heart

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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was highly original and new style writing. I enjoyed every word. There was great emotions in this poem from you. The title said it all. The meaning was special and it was an uplifting read. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820910

Review of His Way, Some Things Just Must Be

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Hi,

I thought this was very well crafted. The meaning was very special and there were some fantastic lines in this poem. I am sorry for your loss, such a long time ago this was written. I am glad I chose this poem to read through, it didn't let me down. A very, very heartfelt poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820907

Review of NEURALGIA 062123

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Hi Naomi.

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I hope you are in less pain these days. This was a simple plea to the Lord for a break from pain. You manged to say so much in just a few words and lines. Normally you are very positive in your writings. Be blessed and write on!

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#4820747

Review of The Glory of God

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Hi Crissy

I too have done things I shouldn't have done and now as I age and mature, I deeply regret them all. I enjoyed reading this item from you. Nicely presented on the page. God, even the title of God is higher than life as we know. I have only read a small amount of the bible. I know from experience that HIS written words are a great comfort to me and I marvel in HIS words. When I think of HIM, I recieve a sense of power, freedom, blessings and strength. Through praising HIM, it is the only way to feel free again and content in our own skin. A good read through.

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Review of Capture the Moment

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Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was well expressed and well written out on the page. A poetic picture in my mind was vivid as I read this through. I enjoyed every word and line. The very first line set the scene very well indeed. A good, creative item to me. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of In my mind

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Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the honesty of this writing. The mind is a complicated thing at the best of times. Once a mind starts to overthink, it never stops again. An interesting theme for an item. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820619

Review of Jealous?

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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought the subject was highly original and very new to me. I liked the presentation, centered on the page, looks good. You expressed yourself very clearly here and I liked the tone and manner in how this was written. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820608

Review of A Paramelamorphia

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Sue,

A sweet little piece of writing here from you. I liked the form very much. The rhymes were cute and I liked the overall effect this work gave me. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. Good imagery and good theme. No distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820490

Review of Moonlight Sparkles

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Hi,

I noted your poem in the newsfeed and decided to give it a read and review.

I really liked the positive message here. Nice structure and flowing rhythm. I liked the tone and manner of the writing, it was soothing to me. Nicely presented, centered on the page. Looks good, no faults noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820469

Review of Stake Your Claim

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Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a great little poem from you. I loved the manner in how you wrote this out. There was a poetic power over me as I read this through. I liked the first few lines about the night, I am a night owl so I related well to this writing. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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#4820191

Review of Haiku

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Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a nice little piece of writing and I enjoyed every word. The simplicity of the words was great, easy to follow and understand. I liked the poem centered on the page. Nice work, be blssed and write on!

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#4819778

Review of Chocolate Bliss

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HAPPY BIRHTDAY Review!

A simple yet very effective piece of writing. I recognised some of the types of chocolate you spoke of. Nicely presented on the page. I also like the small amount of seduction in this poem. An enjoyable read. Be blessed and write on!

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#4818819

Review of Four horses of the Apocalypse

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Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Lovely flowing rhymes and structure to this poem. I liked the religous theme too. It was very powerful to me. I found no way to improve the writing, it is great as it is. The poem as a whole was very good and highly enjoyable to read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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#4818818

Review of The Night

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Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed this poetic writing very much. Nicely written out. Nice flowing words and lines. This reminded me of Pompeii in Italy. An atomspheric poem here. There were no distractions that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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