I loved the imagery that came from this little item here. I could see the lantern, with the flame. A simple yet very effective item. I read it a few times to get the full effect. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Just by reading the top line you wrote out, made me feel a supreme wave of glory and joy. All the quotes and sayings in the bible can be a little dawnting, especially to me. I just love the overall power HE can provide us. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Great writing here from you. There were no distractions at all. I thought this was a very well expressed piece of writing. The rhymes were great, the flowing rhythm was great too. I enjoyed every word and line. A job well done. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was well expressed and written out on the page. Nice clear sized font used. I somehow related to the chaos you spoke of but not an emptiness more of a fit-like panic, the outcome and wishes for answers were still the same. Good work, no distractions found. Write on!
A simple yet very effective little poem here. I enjoyed the flow and rhythm. The theme was great and rewarding to me. I loved the innocent feel overall. Nice presentation on the page, looks good. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed the read through of your writing here. I liked the ending, it made me smile that you wanted the doggies too. A nice expressive poem from you. Nicely executed and no distractions were noted. Keep writing emotional poems. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Great presentation, looks good on the page. Your character in this poem seems very bright and cheerful by her ways. A nice dreamy little poem from you. I enjoyed the read through. I also liked the length of the writing, it kept the readers attention. Good work, be blessed and write on!
Great writing here in this poem. I loved the poetic power of each word and line. I really liked the last line, it rounded the writing off very well and it is a line from one of my favourite songs. Nice font used here, looks good on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I couldn't help but notice a couple of spelling mistakes in this piece. However, I did like the positivity of the writing. A simple yet effective item to read through. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed this lovely poem from you. There was a kind of sweetness around this writing. The title was fitting for the poem and made me smile. A great childrens poem from you. The poetic power was nice. This was fun to read through. Great work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this poem from you held great rhymes and great rhythm too. A lovely tone to the words and lines. Everything you wrote out made sense to me. A great theme and a well displayed piece of writing. There were no distractions at all. I loved the philisophical power here. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading your poem through. There were good rhymes and good flowing lines in this work. The theme was good too. The first stanza was my favourite because everything seem so fine. There was also good imagery coming from the words and lines. The title was inviting to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I really enjoyed this writing from you. I loved your story telling and grammar here. You set the scene so very well indeed. The reality hit home as I read the last few lines, I found it emotional to me. I felt the real power of you meeting your younger self. A very smart piece of writing. No distractions in your work here. Lovely work, be blessed and write on!
You certainly spoke for all the established members here on WDC. I felt the same way as you. WDC has everything we need and I have become a better writer since joining in 2011. I enjoyed the rhymes and flow of your poem here, they were very joyful. Great writing, be blessed and write on!
I liked this poem from you here. The theme was a little sad and tugged on the heart. The tone was real and I could sense the reality of the meaning here. I liked the title, it drew me into the writing. Nice structure, nice flowing lines. Nice creativity here. be blessed and write on!
A simple yet effective little read here. I liked the imagery coming from the words and lines. Cats are much more independant than dogs yet both have a place in our homes. My sister has 5 cats and they are all independant. Another good read from you. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this poem through. I liked the powerful tone and manner of the words and lines. There was poetic beauty here. I liked the last line, summing up everything so well. A simple yet effective poem to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I think you used the prompt very well here. I liked the simplicity of the writing. I also think you are very correct in what you wrote out. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. Good presentation on the page, looks good to me. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed every word and line of your writing here. It was very romantic and powerful. There was good imagery from the poem too. I also liked the tone of the romance, the manner was soothing to me. There were no distractions at all here. Great work, be blessed and write on!
You expressed your feelings so very well here. There was excitement in this poem from you. Nice presentation on the page, looks good. Being and aunt or uncle is very special and brings a family together. I can see you are very excited by your nephews arrival. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed reading this romantic, love poem through. It was very refreshing and held much beauty. There were no distractions at all in this writing. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. The title matched the poem very well. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I related so very well to everything you wrote out here. The depths of dispair and human condition were very evident here from you. I hope there has been some changes for you since writing this item. It is well expressed and very clear to the reader what you face every day. Great expressive work, be blessed and write on!
I think you used the prompt very well. There was a dramatic twist near the end with the plane crash, I wasn't expecting that. There was also a philisophical tone to the story you told. I enjoyed every word and line written. Nice grammar too. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I enjoyed every word and line of this poem from you. There was a poetic power over me as I read this through. You expressed yourself so very clearly and honestly. I liked the flowing rhythm here. There were no distractions at all. You did a fine job here. Good work, be blessed and write on!
I thought this was a very sweet little poem here. The tone and manner of the words and lines was great. A simple yet very effective item to me. The title matched the writing. I really liked the very last line, it seemed to round the writing up very well. There were no distractions in this piece. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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