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Review of Deciduous  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was a special piece from you. A nice warming tone to the poem. You did a fine job here. The nature of the poem was symbolic. I really appreciated this. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of New Beginnings  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Sue, your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

Fact or fiction, this writing held a serious tone to me. Somehow I related well to what you had written down. I liked the title. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. This was a deep piece from you and I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was slected by the random read and reivew page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was perfectly constructed and presented. Absolutely no errors found. The positivity was good. The flow was good as was the rhymes. It is true, we just never know what some people are going through. I related well to your poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of June  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was amazing to read through. I dont normally read shorts but this one caught my eye. There was good story telling here, good grammar too. I am glad this was fiction, it was kind of gripping to me. I enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Heart and Soul  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this was quite deep and meaningful. The praise to the Holy Ghost was great. I loved the positivity coming from each word and line. There was a warming over me as I read this through. You gave the reader a sense of hope and joy. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Happy Fourth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Aww. This was very sweet and delightful to read through. The tone was friendly and positive. I liked the message you sent here. Again, you managed to say so much in just a few lines. The overall effect was good and you made me smile. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
This one made me feel so cold, shivery. lol. A sweet little poem with a nice flow to it. A good theme and was fun to read through. I liked the structure in how you wrote this out. I see no problems with it. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Each Day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed this one from you. I really like the menotioning of Jesus again. The rhymes were ok, they flowed well enough for me. The overall effect is what is more important than technicle sides. The overall effect was one of happiness to me. A joy to read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
I thought this little poem was cute. I liked the line where you said that no one knows where we're going. This line opened up the poems meaning, a delight to read through. I liked the flow, I liked the rhythm too. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of To Journey  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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A good poem to read through. I loved the poetic power this work gave me. I liked the title, I liked the imagery too. The last two lines were great, really effective for me. There were some great lines in this poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Golden Meadow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I enjoyed the read through. In all honesty, I didn't enjoy the form used, but that is just me. The poem was beautiful from start to finish and there was great imagery coming from the words and lines. There was certainly a summery feel to this work. Good job done, be blessed and write on!

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Review of I Welcome Spring  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was beautiful to read through. The mentioning of heaven and loved ones really put an edge on the poem. It made the writing more serious and meaningful. Spring is a lovely time of year and I joined in with your delight. You expressed yourself very well. good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

You truly are connected to the Lord, your bible studies have been good for you. The quotations in the bible are so very comforting and holy inspiring. I liked the poem at the bottom of the writing. It was very powerful. I enjoyed the insight to your beliefs and I agreed with them. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Haiku 0052  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I liked the meaning of this poem from you. It held a certain mood about it, matching what the poem was about. I see you have written many of these little poems and they are all very good. I enjoy your works. Be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I didn't know there were more than one poem here. I enjoyed the read through. I liked the depth of all your writings here. Expressive, deep, poetic and meaningful. Welcome to writing.com. You have come to the right place for feedback on your works. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Lipstick  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I liked the title, I found it revealing. I liked the theme too. A nice accolade for these two women, who have every right to be who they are together. Love is the same no matter what the gender or orientation. Good, original piece of writing. I truly enjoyed reading this through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed the read through. I liked the writing style used here. To me there was a yearning to meet someone. The imagery was great, I could see a city like New Yorks streets. I liked the depth too. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Layer Poetry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought the theme/subject was very original indeed. I enjoyed reading this through. There was a poetic tone to the words and lines. Everyone knows thirteen is unlucky but I wondered how many people remember it is the start of teens. This was a good line from you. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

You explained your situation very well and it is a situation I can relate to. I find, the harder you fight, the harder it gets. In times like this as you have stated there is no escape. I tend to just let the evilness roll over me, I let it happen. But your times are different to mine alone. I wish you luck for the future. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I enjoyed reading this work through. I liked the presentation and font used. To me there was a mysterious feeling to this poem. You left a lot to the reader to decide. The ending was very romantic and left me thinking how they both would end up together. A nice read. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Mermaid's Lore  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was well presented in a blue font. To me there was a lot of mystery surrounding this poem. The length of the poem was good, not too long and not too short. I liked the poetic power this work gave me. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your poem was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very cute and flowed along perfectly. There was a sweet tone to the poem. You managed to say so much in just a few lines, very creative indeed. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Rich Fool!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed reading this poem through. It was indeed very biblical and powerful. I liked the prompt, you did well with it. No errors found. A nice length for a poem too, keeping the readers attention high. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Awww, I enjoyed the positive outcome of this little story, it was delightful. I think you used the prompt so very well. I also think you are a great story writer, clear grammar and imagery. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Your writing was selected by the random read and review page, here's what I thought ..

Nicely presented with a good sized font. A nice, rolling theme and rhythm. I enjoyed reading this through. I also liked the philisophical touch and tone to the poem, it was inviting to me. I see this won 1st place. How wonderful. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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