I often think of what it must have been like for my mother, watching TV shows in the UK. She grew up around "The Beatles" era, the swinging 60's as we called them. My mother is 77 in September and going strong. She often talks about music from way back then. Roy Orbison, Dolly Parton, Johnny Cash especially. She has said that shows today are weak and have no heart and adventure. Looking back is very humbling to me.
I thought this item was good, thought provoking and inspiring. I guess there are millions of people who look back to younger years where TV was primitive.
A well written piece here. Sin is very much like a disease, yes, you were right. I have never thought deep enough to realize that sin can cause wrong choices through life. You are right again. It is a shame that there are people with pig-like attitudes in the world today. With my own mind, I rise above these people. The Lord has always been right in everything he's told us. Scrap metal is a great way to explain sin, or misconduct. Nice first post, keep writing and good luck here on writing.com.
I related well to the VHS tapes, I have plenty of them with family BBQ's and birthdays. The flowing grammar of this text from you was oh so easy to read and much fun too. You write so interestingly well. As for seeing the future, it is very saddening to see how young we all were in the tapes, I find it kind of upsetting how everyone moves on and skin wrinkles with age. Thank you for the insight. Write on!
Nice work here. Good flowing, interesting writing. You said so much in just a few lines. Shorter poems are always a hit with me, keeping your readers attention. Nice title, inviting. A good theme and very poetic. Nice work, thank you for sharing and write on!
Lovely writing. Great expressions of a grateful love. This rolled along perfectly to me. I love it when poems flow so easily, this makes the reading so much fun. Absolutely no faults found. A special, romantic poem. Great writing. Thank you for sharing. Write on!
I enjoyed your creativity here. I also enjoyed the wonderful visions this writing held. A lovely descriptive item. There was a good philosophy used here, I honor that very much. Expressive lines and words made the writing a success in my eyes. My heart enjoyed the little story and information of your life. Good work and write on!
Great usage of the worded prompts. I really enjoyed the whole read through. The rhythm made the poem so easy to read and follow. The title was good too. I am very surprised this has not got 5 stars before. Its creativity was indeed good. I liked the summing up of the writing, the last few lines were great. Nice work and write on!
I thought this writing was very well crafted indeed. The ending was great but not forgetting the seriousness of the subject. The expressive manner was very well documented. I liked how you kept the poem short and direct, thus keeping your readers attention levels up high. Lost love is never easy but if we're honest, it does make us write things. No faults found. Keep writing and thank you for sharing.
I see I am the first to review this little gem. I really loved the flow and creativity here. The rhythm was enjoyable making the poem a success in my eyes. You kept the writing very short and this helped convey your message very well. The shorter poems are always a hit with me, as the writer plays with less words. I enjoyed the whole read through. Thank you and write on!
A delightful little poem, making the subject of the Sun very simple and the effects of summer easy. The title was great and a good match. I found this little poem to be very refreshing and soothing. I smiled as I read it through. A non complicated item. Great work and write on!
I cringed at the thought of devouring an after birth but I have heard it to happen. A short and sweet little poem and I liked the originality and theme. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I also think this subject is spark to lengthy discussions. One thing I know, a woman giving birth can be a near death experience if things aren't right. Overall, a good read and prompt. Write on!
The green text poem was special, rewarding and promising. Once again, a happy ending. I liked the descriptive manner of the poem. I always smile at your happy endings to your works. The imagery from the poem was great and you set the scene very well. I also liked the ending where you said the world may be at peace someday. If only world leaders would listen to the population of each country. All your works are very delightful in the end. You always tell good stories in your poems.
The red text poem was sweet and warming. You reminded me just how special Christmas makes people feel. The celebration of the Lords birth. I would love to know how you can stay so positive in your writings. However, the works give the reader and very nice lift and feeling. As always, good work and write on!
I liked this little poem from you, it was sweet and direct. The message was clear and simple. I liked the positivity here. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. I enjoyed the whole read through. Nice work and write on!
I thought this was a great little read. Cute rhymes and good flowing lines. You managed to say so much in just a few lines. I agree with everything you said. A positive item to read through and it was enjoyable. Good work and write on!
Lovely poetry here, I enjoyed the whole read through. You managed to say so much in just a few words and lines. The feeling as I read this through was nice, the poem was like a mini adventure. Nice imagery too. Great work and write on!
I thought this writing was sweetly written. The flow was cute and rewarding. I really liked the theme, it was rather thoughtful. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. The writing was simple and effective to me. I enjoyed the whole read through. Good work and write on!
I thought this writing was very positive considering the subject and matter. Nice rhythm and good flowing lines. Short and sweet and powerful. I enjoyed the whole read through. You managed to say so much in just a few words and lines. Good work and write on!
A very positive item to read through. I related to what you said about your heart and the love it beholds, set's you free. My heart works in the same way for me. Nice flowing lines, great creativity. There was a great sense of personal discovery and adventure. I enjoyed the whole read through. Thank you and write on!
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Very powerful, very moving and very emotional. You kept the poem neat and tidy without rambling on and on. The message was clear and present. A touching yet kind of painful too. I enjoyed the read through. Good work and write on!
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Good rhymes, good flowing rhythm. The picture with the writing was a nice touch and a good match. This was easy to read and understand. There were some touching lines in this poem. Great work and write on!
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A sweet little item to read through. The imagery was good and you set the scene very well. It was nice to read a little about your family and how you spent time together when you were younger. I enjoyed the poem very much, thank you and write on!
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A simple and effective item, easy to read and understand. The form is popular and worked well with what you wrote out. I noted your character was with their first love, how romantic to marry your first love. Nice work and I enjoyed reading this through.
I thought this was a sweet little read through. There seemed to be a little romance here at the ending, I thought this was cute. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. Nice grammar and good tone to the writing. I enjoyed the read through. Nice work, and write on!
A well written piece here, filled with choice words and lines. I enjoyed the poetic read through. Crafted very well. There was a nice tone and atmosphere along with this writing, it wasn't gruesome considering it was about war and destruction. A nice flowing read. Good work and write on!
Lovely detailed tale here, I was gripped to every word and line. Great atmosphere to this haunting story. The title was good for the words you wrote out, good match. I liked the sense of adventure and wonder. I liked the ending too. I enjoyed the read through. Good work and write on!
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