I decided to return the reviewing favor. I picked this poem because it seemed to be very different. I liked the length of the poem, keeping the readers attention levels up high. The feeling coming from the words was poetic. I do wonder why you wrote this quirky poem. lol..
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I really liked the tone and mannner to this little poem. I liked the length, it kept my attention levels up high. I wonder who Thomas Edison is or was. Nice presentation looks good on the page. Good work and write on!
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I liked the title, it matched the poems contents very well. A deeply crypted piece of work. Nice presentation, looks good on the page. There were some nice lines here. Intereseting work, write one!
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I thought this was a very good piece of poetry and writing. No faults that I noted. Lovely rhymes and rhythm too. I liked the length of the poem, it kept the readers attention levels up high. A good piece of writing, be blessed and write on!
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You used the prompt pretty well indeed. I was shocked at the ending but funny was the imagery. Nice rhymes, nice rhythm too. I enjoyed the read through. No way to improve the poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I truly enjoyed the read through. A sweet and rosy little poem about a cat, your cat. I smiled as I read this out. Nicely written and presented, no faults noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought you used the prompt very well indeed, perfect. Nice structure and good flowing rhymes and rhythm. There were no faults that I noted. The express it in eight seems like a very popular contest, I hope your item did well. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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Perfectly written and displayed on the page. I felt the pain and loss here. Each line was a testament to your friend in need. Lovely sweeping rhyme scheme. I couldnt fault this writing here. Nice moving work, be blessed and write on!
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I have to agree with what you wrote down here, there is a majestic thing going on with nature all around us. How the trees know when to shed leaves. It is all so very special. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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They were all very good. The one about a womans late son was very touching with the oil lamp flickering. I enjoyed them all so very much. Thank you for sharing them here. Great writing, be blessed and write on!
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I liked the imagery off this writing. The form is good too. You managed to set a scene so very well. The title was fitting for the poem. I enjoyed the read through. Thank you for sharing. Be blessed and write on!
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I liked the writing very much. Your poetic tone and manner was evident here. There was a good overall effect to the reader. I liked the ending too. There is no room for improvements. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I liked the flowing rhythm here. I've never written an acrostic, they look like fun. I did wonder why you used capitals, seems angry on the page. I enjoyed the read through and it was fun to review. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought you were very brave in writing this item and telling the world who you are. I really liked the line, "I'm a broken being, incapable of humanity" I so related to this statement, that's how I feel about myself too. I liked the honesty you used here and showed no fear of retaliation of your readers. Interesting work, be blessed and write on!
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I had to use a dictionary for the meaning of demure. A nicely written piece. There was a real feminine glow to this poem. I think you did a great job here with the word demure. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the read through. There is mass confusion in this writing for the lover in wait. A deeply written item. The title was a good match for the writing and it drew me into the work. There were no faults that I noted. Interesting piece, be blessed and write on!
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I thought this was a great piece of writing. Very positive and uplifting for those in a dark place. Good philosophy used in this unique writing. Nice font used and the writing looks good centered on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I thought this was quite good. A good writing style and manner. I liked the feel of the words and lines. There was good imagery coming off the words. There were no faults that I noted. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the read through. A short and impressive little piece. God is good yes. A simple title yet effective. You managed to say a lot in just a few words and lines. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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Beauitful writing. So special by the exellence of the way you wrote this out. A lavish poem, an inspiring poem. You write very well. There was an original pull to this work, you never repeated yourself by every word and line. A good story in the poem too. Lovely writing, be blessed and write on!
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These two little poems have to be the most simplest poems I have read in this form. Very beautiful indeed. I found them a little inspiring too. A lovely poetic feeling here. Great work, be blessed and write on!
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A lovely little poem with using a good form. There were some nice sentiments in each line you wrote out. I know this was written a few years ago but I am guessing the words and lines still have their meaning. Nice work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed this little item, it was cleverly written and displayed on the page. The form is very good too. I think the overall effect is interesting because you only used single words, oddly enough, it works. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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Nicely written with no faults noted. A lovely feel good poem to read through. For me you brought back all the great feelings of Christmas. Nice presentation on the page, suites the writing very well. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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I enjoyed the read through. The flow was good and the rhythm and rhymes were good too. I liked the font you used, looks effective to me. A nice atmospheric little poem here. There were no faults that I noted. Good work, be blessed and write on!
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