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Review of Who Am I?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
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To answer a question, there are several dimensions within the human brain that scientists cannot reach or fathom. All I know, is that when we all pass away we will be in the deepest form of sleep imaginable. For example, I once fainted in hospital while being treated for sunstroke (In Spain). While I was out cold, I didnt dream or sense a thing. I woke up with a doctor slapping my face ever so softly. I asked my then partner how long was I out cold for? She told me about 30 seconds. The strange thing is when I look inside my thoughts, it felt like I had been out for 3 to 4 hours. I was in the deepest of sleep mode. So I know when we pass over, the depth of total unconcousness, (spell check),is far deeper than normal sleep. The depth that death leads to is in another dimension to what we know already.

And who knows what's in those depths. One day, we will all find out.

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Review of Light of Hope  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
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Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a good read to me. The tone and manner of the words and lines seemed very real and truthful. The flow was good too, making the writing easy to read at speed. I enjoyed the poem very much. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Storm  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi again,

Your poem was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A simple yet effective little poem here. We dont get tornados here in the UK (Thank God). I liked the length of the poem, keeping the readers attention up high. The poem as a whole was easy to follow and understand. I found no distractions at all. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was well written out on the page. For the theme of death, the poem was actually rather positively written. I liked the flowing words and lines. I found no way to improve the item. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Black Gargoyle  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your short story was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I was shocked at just how evil the gargoyle could be, turning the woman into a stone angel. This was so unfair. I hope he's happy now. You selected fantasy as a genre for the description of this story. Yes, it was highly dosed with fantasy, dark fantasy. I enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Stick man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Hello Sue,

I noted your story in the newsfeed and thought I would read and review it for you. I thought it was a well told story and the imagery was good. A gripping little story and again the grammar was great. The deatiled story telling made the story a joy to read. The liked the intesity of how the story unfolded. An enjoyable read, thank you. Write on!

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Review of Inspiring Light  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was lovely to read through. So caring, so sweet and loving. A very positive poem from you here. I enjoyed every word and line. No distractions were noted at all. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

I thought this was very well written and displayed, centered on the page, looks good to me. A great topic to write about, everyday life. I enjoyed every word and line. I couldnt fault this poem. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Rediscover  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this poem was very lovely indeed. The poetic power was lavish and wonderful to me. I couldn't fault the poem at all. Lovely sweeping word crafting. Combining romance with the season. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Sunrise/Sunset  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A lovely poem with God in mind too. I love watching the first light in the morning and the stars arrive at night. This poem took my imagination to its summit. I enjoyed the poetic flow and rhythm. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of WEDNESDAY'S  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I thought this was a sweet little insert from you and about you. It seems like you have lots of fun Wednesdays. Small gatherings with friends and a beer and bingo sounds like fun to me. Ive never played bingo, cant keep up with the numbers called.. :) Good writing, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Nature's Way  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

Greatly presented, centered on the page, looks good to me. Nice writing and I enjoyed the read through. Summing up this season very well indeed. Nice rhyme scheme and good flowing lines made the poem easy to follow and understand. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

A deep arguement between two people. Are they in a relationship? I couldnt tell. But it was definately someone at the end of their rope. A well executed item to me. I enjoyed the read through. No errors noted. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of Broken  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Sue,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A simple yet very effective write. Fact or fiction it was very sweetly put. The length of the poem was good, keeping the readers attention up high. The title was a good match for the words and lines. I enjyed the read the through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Buried Name  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A nostalgic poem here. Written very well and presented well too. I liked the tone of the words and lines, there was a wise feeling over me as I read this through. I enjoyed every word. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ...

There to me seemed to be a lot of honesty in this write. A noble man of truth. I liked the title, it was inviting to me. Love can lingure on into other realtionships, we learn as we go. I liked the large font you used. Nice presentation on the page. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

A simple yet very effective write here. I liked the romantic sway of the tale. You managed to say a lot in just a few lines. I enjoyed the little story you told. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Shadows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the way you wrote this out. The deep manner and tone was great. A sweet little journey in this writing. The title was fitting for the words and lines. The presentation was a little off but I still enjoyed the read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Semper Fidelis  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the tone and manner of this poem. I felt the emotional plea from the person in the poem. fact or fiction this was a good prayer and was enjoyable to me. Good presentation on the page, looks good to me. Nice work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Mount Davis  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought..

I really enjoyed this little poem from you here. It was very neat and gave me a sense of freedom as I read it through. The vision I had was clear, the mountain, the climb, the reach for glory was all evident to me. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of Supercede  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
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Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed the beginning of this writing, the sexual notes were revealing and factual. I liked the feeling of truth in your words here. Humans are dumb and follow themselsves into nowhere. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed the educational read through. Does the world know of the high amount of unequality of the nation? I have seen their gold chains and fancy homes, I have seen the muddy puddles the children drink from. It has always been this way there. The call for change will never be heard. Be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Last Dance  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I really liked this poem from you here. The flowing rhymes were great. The subject was good too. A well written item to me. There were no faults or errors that I noted. I enjoyed the tale of this woman in your poem. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I enjoyed the great rhymes and the great flowing movement. I loved the tone and manner in how this was written. I found no way to improve the writing, it is a good item to me. Great work, be blessed and write on!

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Review of The Amalgam  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi,

Your writing was selected by the read and review page, here's what I thought ..

I liked the word crafting and tone to this writing. I liked the flowing words and lines. The title was fitting for the writing. I found no distractions here. I enjoyed the cryptic read through. Good work, be blessed and write on!

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