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5 Public Reviews Given
5 Total Reviews Given
Review Style
I will read the story a few times before giving my review. I will do 3 things. 1. I will tell you if you need more detail or not. 2. I will say what I like and dislike about the story. 3. I will happily give you advice if you want it. You don't need to even pay me! Just E-mail me and I'll review your story for free! I will warn you that I will not hold anything back. If I dislike something or see an error I will tell you. Code of reviewing updated 11/30/17
I'm good at...
Seeing character development or lack there of, knowing when there is enough detail, being honest, giving advice
Favorite Genres
Si-Fi, Animal, Adventure, Action, Military, Drama, Emotional
Least Favorite Genres
Horror
I will not review...
Any horror stories. I dislike them and I just can't read the genre that much without picturing the scene in my head which freaks me the hell out.
Public Reviews
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Review of What Remains  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Oh my......this is the beginning of an amazing story. Alright, Let's begin.

1. I think the detail and the character development was spot on, except that I'm confused on the disaster. What are these Ferals that are about to attack the main characters? Are they hostile animals, or a type of beast?

2. Now I'll be honest on why I took half a star off. I don't speak Spanish. I had to get a friend to translate it for me. I enjoy that you're being diverse by having the characters speak Spanish as well as English. It would be appreciated if English speakers like me could understand what they are saying without needing some type of translator. Just a bit of friendly advice. Have a good day.
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Review of Hurt  Open in new Window.
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
I had a tear in my eye after I finished this lovely poem. This is an excellent example of how someone would feel if their own parents reacted with disrespect towards them if they built up the courage to admit their sexuality. I have a friend who's also a Lesbian who went through this. It took her parents 3 years to accept who she was. I will be sure to read your other work. I've been looking for something different to read and this definitely intrigued me.
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