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Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
interesting...
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Review of Politics and Jobs  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
great editorial
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Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
well written and very thoughtfull piece....
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Review of Fire to Ashes  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Great story...well structured and well written...

please read, rate and review my article when you have a chance....
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Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice article....it shows that you have a deep understanding of the US foreign policy...it also shows that you are very much against this country's current foreign policy(correct me if i am wrong)....the only thing i did not notice from your writing was the good side of this country's foreign policy...do you think it has a good side?

Please read, rate, and review my article when you have a chance.....
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Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
4th pararagraph and 4th sentence i think you by mistake say her solved instead of he solved...other than that great article very inspiring...Please read, review and rate my article when you have a chance....
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Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem....you are the best...
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Review of Sisters  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
First paragraph and sentence one: a semi- colon is not needed after 2007...a coma is the best way to go...
i notice you have used semi- colon abusively please refrain from doing that....
AS IF IT WERE A CHOCOLATE BAR...YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT A PIECE OF PAPER THEREFORE IT CAN NOT BE "AS IF IT WERE" AS IF IT WAS IS THE BEST WAY TO GO...
I WAS IN COMPLETE DENIAL...NOT I WAS IS COMPLETE DENIAL
OTHER THAN A FEW GRAMMATICAL, AND PUNCTUATIONS ERRORS, YOU HAVE DONE A DECENT JOB CONVEYING YOUR MESSAGE....

PLEASE READ, RATE, AND EDIT MY ARTICLE
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Review of EQUALITY  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great poem..very thoughtful and well written...keep up the good work my friend....Please read, rate and review my article....
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Review of TORTURE  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Great article....It sounds very emotional and it seems you are very passionate about the chosen topic. I notice a few punctuation problems but you have done a great job conveying your message...Keep up the good work...Please read and rate my article whenever you have a chance.
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Review of Winston  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great piece. Full of charm and for a moment i thought that i was in Vietnam.
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Review of Conflict in Gaza  Open in new Window.
Review by Herno Remy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
You have given only one side of the story.Therefore, your article lacks objectivity and people will hesitate to accept the information given in your article as true. You show that you are on the side of the Palestinians too much. Other than its lack of objectivity, it is a great article. Please be careful with your punctuations because i notice punctuation problem in your article
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