I m not a good reader but i found your poem very interesting ,impressing . It seems you have
worked to set the rhyming scheme of the poem but this line "My obstacles is going away
And i'm in the month of May" i dont know why but "And i'm in the month of May" makes me feel bit irrelevant . Anyways great poem keep writing
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