This is a cute little poem! I really enjoyed the last two lines because they really stuck out. If you make the rest of the poem like this, it will be perfect. I also enjoy how it shows the many days spent together. If you could tweak it to make it a tad more eye catching (for the lack of words) it will be set:)
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