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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello aconicalbathtub,
I just finished reading your piece of MORNING, EVENING AND NIGHT. iT WAS A GOOD READ. Though it was a sad one, there didnt' seem to be much love from the man in your life. That is the sad part of the whole piece. I hope things are better for you now. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Garry,
I just finished reading your piece of FOR A WOMAN'S BEAUTY. It was a good read byt there were the repetitions in there that shouldn't have been all the way through. It would have been a better poem had you used different words than for a woman's beauty. This is just personal opinion only but I feel that i am right on this issue. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of First Heartbreak  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Misfit,
I just finished reading your piece of FIRST HEARTBREAK. It was good read and a sad one. There was love in the beginning and it was a good start. However, the time he fell for another girl was the end of the relationship you had with him. it is sad that happened to you. I am sorry to hear it. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!{image:1644262].
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Review of Sweet Dreams  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Mojo Fabulous,
I just finished reading your very short piece of SWEET DREAMS. It was a good read though it was very short. I liked the pictures you had within the piece. Like the snug as a pug in a rug for example. Sleep tight, sleepy dog. was another one. One could imagine that you were speaking about these things in the piece. I hope that this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** ..
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello ahtivas,
I just finished reading your informative piece of CHOOSING A GOOD BOOKKEEPER-HOW ?????? It was a good and informative read. There are manythings set up for a bookkeeper to know. it is up to the individual business owner to know which service is the best service. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Requiem  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello stringsone,
I just finished reading your piece of REQUIEM. iT WAS A GOOD READ. it was a read that woke me up to the fact that something is happening in this world and there is very little anything can be done about it. You added pictures to your piece and that was a good thing to do. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Immortal Two  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Inspire,
I just finished reading your piece of THE IMMORTAL TWO. it was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece and it was a good picture and one that was vivid. i think you did an excellent job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Nero's Ghost  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello T.C. Elofson,
I just finished reading your piece of NERO'S GHOST. IT WAS A GOOD READ. I didn't expect what I was getting at the time. I thought it was Nero's ghost that was roaming about to and fro. I didn't knwo it was his mother's ghost. You should have been here to have seen my face. It was turning all shades of red. Anyway, I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Hidden Things  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Inspire,
I just finished reading your piece of HIDDEN THINGS. It was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece, too. A writer can do much for a piece if they paint pictures when they write. You have done just that. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of November Downpour  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Shawndra,
I just finished reading your piece of NOVEMBER DOWNPOUR. iT WAS A GOOD READ. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. It was a good read, as said before. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. You did an excellent job. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Brother  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Samuel,
I just finished reading your piece of BROTHER. iT was a good but sad read. The reason it was so sad was that the mother figure was killed. I think she was at least from what I got of the poem. it is something else for what the brother said about the other at tne end. That your soon will be stained on mine. It sounds as if he was going to kill his brother. That is awful. But it was a good read nonetheless. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Light to dark  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Mindshatter,
I just finished reading your pieceof LIGHT TO DARK. It was a good read for the first time of writing poetry. I think you did an excellent job. there were pictures to be seen throughout the piece. That is always a good sign of a good writer to make someone else see what you are saying. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!![image:1644262}.
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Review of Wedding Bells  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Anonymouslion,
I just finished reading your piece of WEDDING BELLS. It was a good read and one that was such an inspiration to anyone who may read it. It seems that you were the father of her daughter and if so then that is great. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Undecisive  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Jin,
I just finished readingyour piece of UNDECISIVE. I tried to make heads and tails of this piece and for the life of me I can't do it. I would appreciate you emailing me and explaining the piece to me. I read it and it was a good read being in the way it is but i couldn't make head nor tails of it. That is why i need your help in explaining it to me. I hope this finds you well. and all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!{image;1644262}.
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Review of Falling For Him  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Rose Ann,
i just finished reading your piece of FALLING FOR HIM. It was a short but good piece. you did well. True love is one thing that one cannot ever get too much of. It sounded like true love to me in this piece. You have a matured mind for this sort of writing. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of The Snowglobe  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Celera,
I just finished reading your piece of THE SNOWGLOVE. It was a good read. i dont' see any place for improvement with this piece. it is just fine the way it is. I remember one of the snowglobes that you are speaking about. They are fun to look at. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Le Beau Chat,
I just finished reading your piece of MY LIGHTHOUSE MY SEA. It was a good read and a happy one. No one would have known that you were 11 years of age when you wrote the piece had you not told us. You did an excellent job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Hello toria dreams big,
I just finished reading your piece of A POEM TO HEAVEN. I like to say it was a good read and it was for the most part. The only thing I saw wrong with it was where you didn't capitalize the word Lord. In every bit of the Trinity that there are in t his land of ours, there is a need to capitalize the word of Deity. But that was the only thing wrong with this great piece. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
Hello Suurennus,
I just finished reading your piece of THE WOLF AND HIS WIFE. it was a good read and a funny one too. You wrote this piece because you have a foot fetish. I have to agree with you. I think of how strikignly beautiful some men's feet are. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Untitled  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hello Care Bear,
I just finished reading your piece of UNTITLED. It was a good read but a sad one. In that you had tot break up from your boyfriend three and one hafl years ago of being together. That is really sad. You added pictures to this piece. It was beautiful for the pictures being there. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Elizabeth,
i just finished reading your piece of CRYING OUT FOR LOVE. It was a good read. There were pictures to be seen within the piece. You have done an excellent job. There were no mistakes found in the whole piece. It is hoped that this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only **
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Review of Elemental Weep  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Inspire,
I just finished reading your piece of ELEMENTAL WEEP. It was a good but sad piece. So you made the people to be elements? i have never heard of that before. It is ingenius to do that if you ask me. You did a good job. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Brunnette BaybiiGurl,
I just finished reading your piece of CHAPTER ONE: LOVE STORY. it was a good read but regrettable in that James was out of the picture now with Beth falling for Ashton. It wasn't too soon for them to get naked and be in bed. What a story. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Losing Control  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Hello Angelus,
I just finished reading your piece of LOSING CONTROL. iT WAS A GOOD PIECE BUT SAD. Why sad? Becausee you were losing control of yourself and that is never good to do. The inside monster was gaining dominion over you as you put it and that was sad too. I hope this finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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Review of Dear Annika.  Open in new Window.
Review by Beeline Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hello Blake,
I just finished reading your piece of DEAR ANNIKA. iT WAS A GOOD STORY. It was a sad one in that you tried to kill yourself or your character tried to kill themselves. I wonder what made you do that? I know you loved this other person. I just wondered by what means you were going to kill yourself? I hope t his finds you well. And all the best to you. cubby for Beeline!!!!! ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** .
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