This is so sad weeowl. I know the loss of a friend and it hurts so bad. Life is so short, and often times we don't take the time to show others how we care until its too late and we can't. That regret lives with us for the rest of our days.
I understand completely the pain in these words. Oh my gosh, I loved someone once and he couldn't find it in his heart to love back. He led me on ~ ~ I kid you not, for over ten years. Now, trust me, I could have walked away at any time. I even married someone else while I knew him because something told me "I wasn't the one for him" but I could not accept that and so therefore, I prolonged a misery that could have died an earlier death, but I lived in denial, and wasted many years of my precious life on a futile love.
Your beautiful, heart-wrenching Poem here, Belinda, brought all those painful memories to the forefront. (I forgive you, LOL). I forgive you because the power of your words - the fact that your words could dig up my tombstones of memories ~ is a feat only a great Writer is capable of doing. So you succeeded in bringing back a floodgate that I wish had never flowed, but nonetheless, it was a lesson learned and I went on, moved on with my life, and with someone that truly could share their heart and Soul with me.
Thank you for inviting me to your Port. I'm glad I stopped by.
We've all experienced a broken heart to some degree. Your piece was very emotionally written and touching in just the right spots - the ones that hurt, the ones we remember being hurt.
I remember many broken hearts . . . mine and the ones I unfortunately, broke in others.
You bring it all back so poignantly, with your talent, in the words you have written here.
I hope you are long over this pain . . . and thats its a foggy memory.
I identify with this totally, as I have suffered, and still do, (with good reason) with Chronic Depression my entire life.
Loved all the lines here, too many to name, or I would just recite the entire poem, here.
Depression is a real, tangible thing ~ ~ its painful, and it affects those aroud us as well. We could live in a Mansion, and have our Knight in Shining Armour, or a Queen that worships the ground we walk on, and tears could be a daily expel without cause or reason.
I have been happy in the midst of horrors ~ ~ at the same time, I have felt suicidal in the midst of great esctasy ~ when Depression hits, it does not discriminate and we are at its vile mercy.
Very well written piece on a subject many have heard of and hopefully, not experienced. It has become a part of my life and I have learned to live with it symbiotically, and, as long as it doesn't totally take over, I might even be "happy" for a moment at a time.
Always your moving words are poignant and feed the Soul. You are truly an amazing writer whom I am priviledged to know, and be friends with. Your light shines all the way here to Colorado. I catch the beams in my fingertips, and move on, in hopes that soon, I too, will have a Soul-light as beautiful and bright as YOU.
What a wonderful tribute to the Monarch of your Fanmily - this poem needs to read as a tradition in your Family - and framed up on a wall.
The lines were so simple, and yet impactual ~ ~ really great imagery here as well as the realism of viewing one of nature's most exquisite insects: the Monarch Butterfly.
Just exquisite, powerful writing in all its glory - many spellbounding, nostaglic moments intermingled in the words.
A true artistic piece that kept me riveted, but not in a horror-way, just glued to the context, wanting to know what was going to happen next.
I felt like an Outsider, and this was happening live before me, as the scenario unfolded, thats the realism in this piece, and what marks it as a wonderful gift for all to read.
Remarkable - you got across the sadness of an old, homeless woman with expertise. Just great. Lines and rhyme scheme impeccable. All tied into the sad tone and message - great job.
Oh, this was so sweet, as though your Soul were writing this down, etched in your being, while you were looking down at the sleeping child and then left briefly only to write it all down.
Straight from the heart - straight from the folds of love, and straight from a loving soul.
Rose - all of these are wonderful. All of them. The other cNotes are great too, the ones with Thank You and I've Got my eye on y0u . . . those were so cute.
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