It just shows something people will always think presidents with 8 years or two terms are worse than presidents with one, no matter what happens.
I mean it also shows the voting on partisan bases, i mean no democrat would vote against Bill Clinton, because he was the bes they had since JFK, so at least 25% of the voters were republicans and 35% democrats
Well, I don't think the reasoning is correct, though sarcastic, I think it is wrong to steal no matter the circumstance.
People who were poor before, can't expect to benefit from a situation where everyone is losing, It just doesn't add up. I don't think the poor should get richer because of a storm.
I pray for you to find her soon, if only there were more people who think about the personality like you do and less of the shallow minds who constantly think about the looks.
You poem is interesting and inspiring and I think you do deserv the 4.0 that everyone is giving you on this piece.
I think perfection needs more than what you wrote, it needs more emotion in such a poem, your emotions are there but they need to be expressed more freely.
May her soul RIP, I hope these writings of yours get you to go on in life. I liked especially about this piece its uniqueness. You din't write about the pain of letting go or the her endurance of pain. instead you wrote of memories which people can relate more to.
I also like how phrases didn't end in the same line. that's good
Vivid imagination and true stereotyping. I think you got somewhere with this piece whether or not you intended to. People realize that not all Maniacs live the same way but they think that alot of them do.
I would be interested to know what the difference is when you spoke about indoor plumbing. I think ignorant flatlanders are really just that, have your fun with them.
I liked the simple atittude this poem carries, and it admits it. Did they not look at each other? They would have realized that they look similar.
"and after a flurry of gold scales and bubbles,"
This part is made very vague and simple, maybe two verses are in order just after this one. Just to show us what happened. also the rhyme of the last two verses.
If people do tell you or email you what other is I would love to know, I personally chose Nero because of a study I wrote in which i proved that he slowed civilisation progress by more the 200 years, that's more than both world wars put together.
I think we should give room to atheists to join in, what if I don't believe in God, I will be a hypocrite to sing the national anthem as it is. Many people think the mention of God is ok with all relegions, so what's the harm. I think people who don't believe are not made for in society.
The pain of one death can be great, too great to make us do things we never would have considered. People will never think of someone committing suicide because of a loved one's suicide. Yet it happens, and to bring it up is smart of you.
People presume that someone who is pained from another's suicide would never put their loved ones through the same pain. It is true, but if the pain is too deep, he will jump.
A romantic and sweet poem, Valentine's day should always start right, if it doesn't then there is no point. I mean people should always show their spouses that they love them first thing in the morning, that will their day.
I enjoy reading descriptive work, it is interesting how the image comes racing in our heads once we read it, if we don't we will never reach it.
You had good descriptions.
Half in shadow the rest lit by the sunlight,
Your eye-lashes curl lazily as you sleep,
Lasting love is the love that makes people feel happy, feel hopeful of the world, this poem is rather inspiring and it certainly comes useful. I was surprised by your ability to write both sad and lifting poems.
The greyest of skies still look blue to me,
My heart feels light and free from pain.
When you say this, while cliche in a way, it will lift the morale of almost anyone.
I feel like saying amen, it is just too hard not feeling with your poem, I am not an expert in poetry, but I think I can safely say that you have a unique style that foolows a pattern when it comes.
I think such a style makes poems more aproachable, readable and mostly more understandable. You don't go over the roof trying to find a rhyme, you write it when it comes and thats beautiful.
I liked most about this piece, besides its elegant connectivity, is its ending, you have stood away from the ussual and the cliche and had a striking ending that doesn't show hate, it shows power.
Power, though hard to muster in such situations, is neccesary for moving on.
OT: I think that you should make the rewards payable for your poems, 1001 GPs so that after WDC deducts its 25% you will be offering 751 GPs which will set many of your pieces from the 50s and 60s on the autoreward list to the 20s and 30s.
Wrong line of work he is, soon in the future they will make a list similar to the "don't call list" that will include the adresses of people who don't want marketers to come to them.
I like the aa bb rhyming and you rhymed without affecting the poem, it was subtle which i encourage.
This story sounds to me as the kind of science fiction that is aimed towards the narrower audience of detailed and specialized sci-fi.
You writing is appealing to me but I think you should go ahead and ease down the town if you want a bigger audience. Your narration of human interaction is interesting but not quite the publishable standard
I was really startled with story I understood it not, and the only thing I figured is that your use of the current german chancellor name should either have some deep symbolic significance or is the lack of imagination on your side.
I have reviewed a number of items from your port before and all were pretty good, this one however I don't understand, If you would please answer me this:
Did you intentionally use Gerhard Shroder's name?
Did the man die or faint or something of the sort at the end of this?
If the man was a nazi officer in the years 1940-1945 and he was a 25 y/o dentist then now 60 years later he would be 85-90 years old. This story couldn't have been set 20 years earlier because cyber crime was not that big back then
I really do respect your work but I had trouble understanding this piece. I will galdly review it again if you do some editting or if you explain it to me.
Its sad but its true, People will always feel worse for people who got haremd through no fault of their own and through no fault of any other human for that matter.
Maybe if you gave this man a name or a tongue people will sympathize much more, also if you can elaborate on what he felt, does he think he is lucky?
You are without doubt very comfortable with your pen, or should I say keyboard. The thing that intrigues me about this piece is your ability to transition from different moods and settings. You understand the feelings but you let it to the reader to grasp your exact manings so you don't come off as boring.
Writing as "me" or writing for "you" are always the hardest since you have to convey feeling and emotions in depth with being over-descriptive.
I totally agree, at the first here I collected more than 10,000 GPs by simply just reviewing the autorewarding items. Then I realized I wasn't giving my best reviews.
I went to each one and emailed:
1- apologized
2- did a detailed review
3- offered the GPs back
The result was shocking to me, a new user on the site, I was not only turned down on point 3, but I was given yet more points.
At some point, I impressed someone enough to give me a two month premium upgrade, I then resorted to giving back to the community.
A great place it is here and I agree with all you wrote, begging is not worth it. People will reward a good job in this community much better.
It really is interesting how much work goes into transporting your pet outside or inside a country. you sound very credible and very experienced on the topic.
Some parts of the world have different requirements such as in-house testing and compulsory 10-day quarantine.
It was hellarious, I enjoyed it, I used rather naughty terms in this madlib nad got a hellarious piece, I loved the part where you used a fruit and a body part to create a character name, and another by just using an animal name, it does sound like you are very creative.
Good job
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in which i proved that he slowed civilisation progress by more the 200 years, that's more than both world wars put together.