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Rated: E | (5.0)
This was so good! You had a real story here, and even though it was short, it didn't feel rushed. I felt really sad after reading this, and almost started crying. The twist, where at first I thought everyone was being rude to him, he was abandoned by his family, or was the last one left, but then it turned out he was the one who couldn't remember was just the chef's kiss. There's not much I would change, maybe just some way to make it flow better, but even that I'm not sure. Overall, 10/10.


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