I certainly hope that you have found a market for this. It should be shared with the world. It's beautifully written. When you "teach" others with your writing, that is truly a gift.
I read this poem first and was impressed. Then I read your bio and I can see why you write like you do. You are definitely altrustic and we don't find a whole lot of that going on anymore in today's world.
This is a touching poem. I especially liked the title as it lures me into wanting to know what the poem is about. Great job!
Hi! I'm new, but I've written and read a lot of poetry and I really think this is very good. You really have developed a nice style. The flow is great and you incorporate a story.
Bekka
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