A bonus for originality off the start of this review. As we rarely see this age group for Size-Changing stories. Which is a shame. The age group offers more variety of subject matter to occur.
In short, Chaos is greater. With a mind still developing. It makes the actions of the Giantess(es) more unpredictable. Adding sibling relations also adds fuel to the potential one could create. Granted the age and relations may not be to everyone's liking for whatever reason.
I believe, fiction shouldn't be censored or limited. Fantasy is fantasy and the greater stories have little restrictions, if any. Please show your support to this interactive.
The more originality we have, the better this community can grow and enjoy good content.
My original Review for this interactive was a 3.0/5.0, but since that time, it has grown quite a bit, no pun intended. Many, many lovely ladies to choose from. Very young to Adult. With many options to choose from as well. It has come a long ways, so in my re-review I'm giving it a 4.0/5.0
There is still some lacking issues that my old review brought up, but it has gotten a lot better since. Which is why I wanted to do a re-review. As the Author says in his description of this interactive. There isn't a lot of Eureka 7 Expansion Interactives on here or really anywhere else to be frank.
So that is another reason it gets a bumped score. It's always nice when a show that is rarely seen gets some love as well too. So please, continue to show love to this interactive, especially if you liked the anime it's based off of. Many, many options to choose from and so many chapters to start or continue where others have left off.
Ben 10 Gwens Adventures, for those who are into the Preg Genre. This is a good place to visit. Some don't like Preg, but if your curious about what all the fuss is. Then check it out, although be warned as some of the content is not for the lite of heart.
But this is the reason I did like this interactive even though I'm not a big fan of Preg. It tried many places and isn't afraid to push beyond a comfort zone, even though it's based on one show. Some might disagree and shun some of it's content. But a Fantasy is a Fantasy. Limiting a Fantasy is just outright boring.
So why not push the limits and beyond. My score is only low as some of the content that has been written, could be better in detail. Now the author is fine, it's just some of the others who've added could had put a little more effort into it. When writing, you want your reader(s) to be able to in vision what they are reading is happening and the longer it is, the better. Short writing can be good at times, but in this place. Longer is better.
With that said, don't let the last part there discourage you from checking this interactive out and adding your own chapters as well, especially if you're a fan of the Ben 10 Universe and you also like your ladies pregnant and ready to give birth.
RWBY Expansion is scarce and even more scarce are Interactives for the related themes. But this is an Interactive that is written quite well and leaves many options to expand upon (no pun intended) So if you like/love the show, "RWBY", then I highly suggest you check this interactive out and add to it.
It maybe on the small side, but with some care and attention. It can grow into something much bigger (once more, no pun intended again) So show this interactive some love and spread the word to others who like GTS, BE, etc. And try to help get more chapters in and move the plots along. A major thanks to MajinLamp, the creator of this interactive.
This Interactive was made to be a spiritual successor to it's original. Which sadly is gone, but this is far from being a complete case of sad news. Since it's spiritual successor may be newly made and has a long ways to go in surpassing the original. What few dozen chapters are already here, show that this will grow into a fine interactive soon enough. So this is why I am giving it such a good score, and I also believe if folks who care about great writing and quality over quantity. This Interactive will be well on it's way in becoming one of the greatest GTS Interactive on the web.
A nice concept, but it falls short to the fact no detail in the actual shrinkage itself. I will admit I'm not into Male Shrinkage per say, but I do like to read shrunken stories from time to time. You really should add detail to the actual shrinkage it's self. Even if the pace is fast, but not too fast now. It would have added more depth to this whole interactive.
I was interested inking this inactive out when I first saw it, t I am a bit disappointed in the fact there is little detail in the shrinkage it's self and that clothes shrink too. So that is a double negative for me. Now as far as how it's written is the only reason the score wasn't lower. Since the format it's written in is crisp, clean, and smooth moving. So that is a plus in my book. Also your not okay with underage GTS, but your okay with Keeping scat/urine? I know you said to a minimum, but really? But that's all I had to say. If the clothes didn't shrink and the process was slower and more detailed, I would have given this a easy 4 out of 5. But I said I gave it a higher score over your format, so that is something good you can take away from this. I wish you the best of luck in your future works.
I was interested inking this inactive out when I first saw it, t I am a bit disappointed in the fact there is little detail in the shrinkage it's self and that clothes shrink too. So that is a double negative for me. Now as far as how it's written is the only reason the score wasn't lower. Since the format it's written in is crisp, clean, and smooth moving. So that is a plus in my book. Also your not okay with underage GTS, but your okay with Keeping scat/urine? I know you said to a minimum, but really? But that's all I had to say. If the clothes didn't shrink and the process was slower and more detailed, I would have given this a easy 4 out of 5. But I said I gave it a higher score over your format, so that is something good you can take away from this. I wish you the best of luck in your future works.
Wow, just wow. This was so well told and explains in-depth the truth behind greed and what it looks like. This story was a beautiful read from start to it's very cruel but disserving end. It is just a great plot and I truly couldn't find a fault what so ever in it. Just beautiful writing.
The Genie plot is another one of my favorite types for GTS stories and the likes, though the whole, "Reality Change" isn't really to my liking, since it takes some fun away and the reaction of folks around you becoming scared or such is one of the best parts of a size changing interactive of any kind. Also I absolutely despise clothes changing with the subject(s) in question, but with all this said, I have enjoyed this Interactive, like I have with your other one. Please continue to write.
This is one of my Favorite Interactives, the idea behind it is original and adding some plant elements isn't my cup of tea as far as body changing into a plant or the likes, but! That doesn't take away the awe I feel for this Interactive. A nice amount of chapters and a story that is to pick-up and continue on yourself. Just fine work.
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