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Review by Rein Saent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)

There be no shame, inside an honest soul,

capacity and goodness demand no costly toll.


Your honesty is generous in accepting all your flaws,
yet you forget acceptance, is what matters above all.

This wonderful kingdom, that which we have beheld,
is the paradise for everyone, not one condemned to hell.

The drive is to keep living, through all the masks and facades,
you'll find yourself eventually, just wait another day.

But if you're tired of waiting, make the crucial move,
decide upon your very self, to be the one to choose.

Give yourself the honesty, of accepting all your flaws,
and move onto better things, which promise God above all.

Live for yourself, your spirit, and feed your starving soul.

This kingdom promises good things, to all who wish to go.


Forget the flaws, and empty promises held, realize the one truth here.

YOU are the onle one, who can help yourself be near.

Nearer to that truth and acceptance, of what is your truer self,

so drop all the worries and compromises, that didn't have much cause,
and follow whatever's in you heart to find no more loss.

-Rein
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Review by Rein Saent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Treacherous people,
like you and I

They have their feelings, and they have their minds

Seldom we consider that they were once us,

But through actions and failures, evil is a must.

No longer can they function, in simple peace

Each little sin, they yearn for a piece.


But you're right to say, that it's best we avoid them

Because being caught in the wrong crowd brings happiness seldom.

But we shouldn't condemn them in a spiteful way,

merely we should pass them by with a smiling face.

Let them go, with their cruel ways, and walk along, with a cheerful gaze.
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Review by Rein Saent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love the meter.

You write from truth.
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Review by Rein Saent Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (2.0)
God?

I remember asking these same questions, but I suppose the only thing that keeps us there is Faith. I was baptised Catholic[sounds bad right? Hah.] My father was very much catholic and is still very dedicated, but I won't go into the hypocrisy and such flaws of structured religion.

I know of religion and God, because I was raised in the way. I am blessed to have an understanding mother who allowed me to think for myself. She never pressured me and hence i have been free to form my own thoughts.

It's all up to you. The thing I see is, you're following everyone else's view of God.

I mean, I have no knowing of "His" being real and have my own doubts, but I form my own views. Why should i go by what everyone else says. Even if there isn't a God. I'd like to believe so, it's much more fun and a bit easier sometimes. In a sense I do believe there is some sort of entity out there, but it's partly all hope and faith. Even without that though, just live and appreciate what you do have or what there is.

I love nature. Im a bit old fashioned and pagan in that sense. I believe people have souls. But it's all a matter of faith and Hope.

For each person it's different. I can't tell you what to believe of hope for. It varies and it changes. People make up their own reasons. There's merit everywhere. Ignorance is bliss, but I make it through by trying to be a btter person everyday and helping people.


There's a universal truth that we can only speculate about. No one knows until they're gone. We can only assume and keep living. That's the control we have, what we make of our own lives. We choose who we are and how we affect each other.

Right now is what matters most. Later you can worry about a judgement or not. Right now is most important. Take it a day at a time.
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