First off, I'd like to say, this poem is great.

I admire how much emotion is behind this. It seems like it has a lot of meaning.

Grammar, Punctuation, Spelling, ect.
The only thing I can see to point out is to make sure you capitalize all your "I's".
Just a suggestion:
On the line that says
"I hope it wall was worth it."
I'm sure you meant to say all, but try rephrasing it, to "I hope it was all worth it." I personally think it rolls off the tongue nicer. It's just a suggestion though, you don't have to change anything. Also, perhaps you could space your poem out a little bit? Make it into more stanzas to seperate ideas? Once again, just a suggestion.

4.5 stars for that.

Overall Content
I really like your poem because of the emotions that I believe are truely behind it. It really looks like something I would write in a journal or something. Relationships are tough. The ending of relationships is even harder. I am giving you 5 stars on this for putting out something so personal. Plus it flows, which is something to look for in poetry.


Good job!

-Renea