This is haunting and had some powerful emotion provoking phrases. I loved how the end tied back to beginning of the story, I would love to read more from you.
This is tragically beautiful. It is honest, and I have to say a tear rolled down my cheek when I got to the end. The character really grew, whether it was you or not, and became positive. I loved the end. I will definitely want to read more from you!
I truly enjoyed this. The second to last stanza was very honest and it really brought the reader to the end of the poem seamlessly. I hope I get to see more of your work in the future. I have just joined writing.com and I am happy this piece was my first review.
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