This poem is very touching, and I personally love the honesty of the words. It really is an amazing poem, and it makes me think, how many guys really go through this? And I would hate to come across as rude or judgemental, but you have to remember that the other 60% are women, and that is a cold, hard fact I know to well...But thats not the point of this review. The point of it is being able to say that I think you are an amazing writer!
Finally! Someone who understands! I'm not saying that this is a good habit (if this is even about you?)
but after reading this I kind of feel relieved that there is someone who can explain it all (what I, we? do.) in such beautiful words.
If this is about you, Im not going to tell you to stop cutting (because that wont do any good)
but i will tell you to keep writing! I see great potential in your words!
This poem is absolutley lovely and true. It makes me think of the one that I'm with. I kept asking myself the question, Is the love I feel for him, the way you, the author, views it? And the answer is yes.
"Because the only way to truly love anything is to realize that it might be lost
For love knows not its own depth until the hour of separation."
My absolute favorite line, and possibly the best quote about love that I have ever read. This is truly an amazing poem, and I thank you for posting it here. It puts love into prospective for me.
I love the sheer honesty and reality of the poem you have written. It really amazes me when a poem can put life into perspective for me, plus I just love rhyme!
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