I really enjoyed this poem. The flow and ryhtm were amazing. I enjoy all types of poetry but ones that rhyme are my favorite. i think you did an excellent job on that and the message was clear and percise. I give you a lot of credit because I always found it hard to write about a subject such as sports but you did a wonderful job. Overall I enjoyed it very much.
I liked the first poem the flow was amazing. I really enjoyed the message. The second poem was simply wonderful. My favorite line was "Destroyed like the love it once captured". Very well thought out and beautiful flow. The last poem is so sad but true. It was so captivating it made me feel as if I were there in that very moment when the kite was first shot down. All around you did an amazing job on all three.
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