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Review of M3m0RiEs  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
That was the most amazing hart-wrenching thing I've ever read. I can't believe you put it into words. My grandfather has had dementia since I was very little. I've visited him almost every day since fourth grade so this hit pretty close to home. I don't know if this story is true, but you wrote it very well. Amazing job! keep up the good work!
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Review of Loveless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
hey my g! in the description your "then" need to be a "than"
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Review of Sorry  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
try rewriting this a little it's hard to follow.
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Review of Torment  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
THAT WAS AMAZING!!! The way you repeated the words to show her madness from being alone was extremely well thought out. The god with no eyes was a little confusing, but sounds really cool! I know that this is from three years ago, but keep up the good work!
xoxo Purple Rose
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Your story's intro immediately grasped my attention! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and I am very excited to see what happens next! The way you choose to describe what is happening is very appealing and I can almost imagine what it happening! The names you chose are also very eye catching and interesting. I too enjoy choosing names you do not see very often. Readers usually enjoy the variety of names. Keep up the good work!
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