Hi-I haven't posted to any of the threads in over a year. My sidebar says that I posted a few hours ago that's strange. I've enjoyed reading some of stories, and poems. I wish everyone a HAPPY and prosperous 2015!
I bid for the port raid from BECKY- 25,000 GPs. I think is a really wonderful contast i was very excited to find it this week. I am going to participate in as many of the activities as i can. I think this celebration is going to bring a new crowd of writers to WDC.
I thought your form was good, it had the flow of poetry and kind of a mix of prose. It reminded me too much of the oringinal poem. The son would be in a whole new generation with, probably diffrent values and takes on life. He would have opportunities, his parents, didn't have. I liked your form so much I'm giving you fifty points, despite that. Please keep up the good work!-rixxie
I really liked this poem, short, it flows, nicely it reminds me of some of my earlier works. I'm trying for longer items.I would only enhance the last line, by adding, two to three words prior to :"As I...", to even out the flow.
I liked your story it kept,my interest even though, I tend to stray away from this type, it's scary. I think I would throw little surprises in, diffrent from the main story. I liked it as a package, I could see you including in a collection of short sci-fi, stories.
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