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Review by Robert Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is a very informative and enlightening article. Other than a couple punctuation errors
very well written. I think mules are underappreciated, they have faithfully served Mankind
for many years, and will continue to do so for many years to come. Keep up the great work!


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Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I just wonder if there is a better way to write the part-Thinks The daughter. Like the Daughter reminised or somthing like that, just a suggestion.

also a few puncuation and capitalization errors otherwise nicely written piece.


Yes it shure seems difficult to let go of things for some people even though the memories are in our minds and not in things.


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Review by Robert Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Not bad a few spelling and punctuation errors but thats always my weak area so I have to check and re- check my work. I dont agree with all of your statements, but I respect your right to express your beliefs and opinions. I think you could continue with this it could be a few more pages long maybe more. But I do agree we are all so empathetic we we are like sheep. so busy with our lives we do nothing to make change. keep up the good work.
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