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Review of Love you..  Open in new Window.
Review by Maddie Ralstin Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.5)
I'm trying not to hurt your feelings. what you wrote felt like it had no true meaning, it felt like just some words on the screen. it did't feel like you had put much emotion into your work.
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Review of Death.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I like the message your sending, but the way it sounds i kinda choppy, try creating a better flow
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Review of It was a Dream  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It's a good poem, the only thing I would change is that extra cry at the end, it loses its aura when you have that extra cry.
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