very nice , its great way to express the childhood feeling and happyness as well as simplicity.
mother's way of loving and scolding is great.
I was ready to play
My mom starts to laugh
As she says not today
Honey there is no snow
In the middle of May
this item is fairly cool!!
nice attempt to write...good command over language.
it has intresting start..
i think...i will read it a gain...........................................in short nice work...
my west wishes.
cool dude.......will see ur work again.
thanks.:)
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