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Review of Snow day  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
very nice , its great way to express the childhood feeling and happyness as well as simplicity.
mother's way of loving and scolding is great.
I was ready to play
My mom starts to laugh
As she says not today
Honey there is no snow
In the middle of May

the above lines are great!
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Review of Do Not Go Gently  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (2.0)
this item is fairly cool!!
nice attempt to write...good command over language.
it has intresting start..
i think...i will read it a gain...........................................in short nice work...
my west wishes.

cool dude.......will see ur work again.
thanks.:)
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