This is a really nice poem, but i really , really like the specific instructions and how you managed to pull something so beautiful with these much restrictions. I can imagine a picture from your words, and that is something i admire. Keep on writing such nice poems.
As a huge fan of classic movies, you understand this masterpiece instantly caught my attention. My favorite verse is the second one, the one with R2-D2. Its a bit irrelevant, but i also like really much the picture. Continue writing such nice poems (especially star wars themed ones, i like then very much).
I believe this to be a very nice poem. I really like the different encouraging styles for each category.My favorite verse is the last one. I really like the encouraging and refreshing style of the poem generally. Keep it up, and continue writing such beautiful poems!.
I just became a huge fan of this poem. I just really like how you merge two different things and how you blame them to be oblivious to pop culture. You are a genius. I believe this to be a masterpiece and by far one of the best poems i have ever read.
I do not know much about poetry, but i have read some books about it.
I like this poem very much, because it rhymes almost perfectly. If i was to submit a correction it would only be in the end ,where after "you are everything" goes "i am not" which fits perfectly , but it does not rhyme as good as the rest of the poem. Henceforth, i believe this to be an excellent poem. I encourage you to continue writing such nice poems.
Rom
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