Its really good. Very stand alone, deep, thorough and simple. The message you deliver is clearly significant and well-defined. The topic is well explored. The fact is that this poem looks like a molded glass, any suggestion to temper with this work seems like an intrusion that will, perhaps, dismember it.
Great work,
Inspiring, thought provoking and quite challenging. The purpose of short stories is very well outlined in this work. And also the philosophical commentary is very interesting. Great piece of work!
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