Hi! I really love reading poem that's come from the heart, although I feel bad that this poem is about " friends are better than family ". Sometimes friends really understands you more than your family. I can relate in this poem so I think this is good. For me a good writer should be able to make his/her reader relate their feelings to what they are reading. I can't say anything about the technical aspect of writing but I guess your writing is better compared to mine. Have a nice day.
People usually forget to honor and be proud about their country, most of the time they only see all the negative sides of their country and criticize it . They often say that their country is useless specially those people that lives in the poorest country. I really like your poem the message is very clear and it shows your love to your country. I may not be a good reviewer when it comes to grammar and technical part of writing but I always believe that writing is all about the heart and soul of the writer. I really like this, reading this reminds me of how much love I have for my country.
hi! I read your story, I can't give you any grammar related reviews since I'm still on the process of learning as well. I can only share my thoughts about the story. The idea is really good but there's something missing I can't find the right words to describe it. When I read my imagination works as well. Its like I can really see what's going on in the story just like watching a movie. That's what I think is missing.. I can't visualize your story. I'm also new at writing so I hope we can help each other. I hope you can read my stories too and review them. Take care.
I learned a lot in this advice and i may not remember all this but i can always read this article again and again. Now that im starting to write my very first novel, im going to visit this article often. Im always confused with all of the things you mentioned on your article but now its more clearer to me now. Thanks.
Sincerely,
Rose
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