i like this so far my only problem is close to the start there are options were something is supposed to happen and it does for 1 sentence and then its just your eaten lot. its no fault of yours. just becuase theres so many a little culling might be needed. i am sending as many gift points as stars i would rate this story if it was fixed.
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