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Review of Love is Red  Open in new Window.
Review by rachelizabeth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Good descriptions! It was smart to use things that people all know and love in order to describe love itself.
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Review of Darkness = love  Open in new Window.
Review by rachelizabeth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (2.0)
Watch noun-verb agreement.
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Review of Hello Sun  Open in new Window.
Review by rachelizabeth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The piece is very happy and bright, just like the Sun itself. I can imagine the song being very cheery and folksy.
Keep up the good work!
--r
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Review of Save  Open in new Window.
Review by rachelizabeth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This is so short and simple, but I actually really like it. Great job! Keep using your emotions to fuel your writing, it is the best advice I could give.

--r
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Review by rachelizabeth Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
This is pretty clever, especially the 'get me' line. Keep up the good work!
--R
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