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Review by Jeod L. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, that was really good.
I think it was ever so slightly rushed, but nothing big, and we didn't get any substantial background on any of the characters, but it was still very believable.
I wish that there was a bit more world-building, all I got was that Earth was getting a spaceship built and a construction worker died in the process.
Other than that, it was very good. The description was vivid and realistic, and the dialogue wasn't forced.
I hope that you continue to write as well as this, and you have my support.
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Review by Jeod L. Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
That was very inspiring and deep. One of the best dystopian short stories I've ever read!
I got slightly confused when the boy killed the man, but after reading it over a few times I got it. All in all, I loved it!
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