Wow. Good job Kris. When I first saw the piece i was scared b/c of the length but once i read the first paragraph i was drawn to read more. I love your story line. It's different. I usually read romance or urban lit. so for me to have read and actually enjoyed your piece that says a lot about your way of thinking. Continue with your great story ideas and i'm sure i'll be running across this book and more in bookstores.
Short, sweet, simple, deep, beautiful, a breath of fresh air! Keep up the good work. Nice job painting a picture through the description of your words.
Love it! This is the type of poem that is easy to relate to. It didn't take you lines upon lines to prove a point. It was short and sweet. I'm starting a movement of a new generation of poets. We need to fill libraries with talented poets of our now not just our past. If you ever want to publish a collection of poetry contact me!
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