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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Through your writing, I felt like I was in the house with you during the hurricane. Thank goodness that everyone in your family, including your dogs, remained safe.

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*I thought to myself, "This has to be the worst storm I've seen since Freddy." - Usually thoughts are indiciated by putting the writing in italics rather than quotations.

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*I think that I would characterize this piece as prose, but nonetheless, it is a very inspirational piece - wonderful writing!

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*Nothing noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*This starts outs very scary, but ends peacefully - a good scary poem!

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*"Be Quiet!" She screams within - no need to capitalize she

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*4 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Even though the events took place almost 5 years ago, your writing has captured the emotions and feelings of September 11th in a compassionate and respectful manner - great work -

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Intuey - you have a talent for writing such inspirational pieces - wonderful poetry!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*A very nice little triplet! Great work -

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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*I like this reversal in that you write from the point of view of a man - a very touching poem.

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*isle - should be aisle

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*4 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Flower1* What I liked *Flower1*
*This poem was so very nice to read and touching - great work!

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*Nothing noted -

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*This poem could easily be used as a prayer if the reader wanted to - you have a talent for writing inspirational and uplifting poetry - great work!

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*Nothing noted -

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*Another great poetry folder! I can't wait to look at the last poetry folder that you have - you really do write all genres of poetry and have found very unique styles of poetry to write. Great work!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
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*Very nicely written - you have created a very emotional poem about a young girl longing for some type of freedom and responsiblity - very well done!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*I haven't heard of the Nata Uta form of poetry before, but I like the way that you have used it in this poem - very nice!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*I really liked the comparison of anger to a wall - it's so true - once it's built up, it's so hard to tear down. Great writing!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Great acostics - this can be very hard to write, but you have done an outstanding job!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*This is absolutely beautiful and touching - very emotional. Another great poem!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
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*This is such a heart wrenching poem - you are speaking truths about the world today - very dramatic and emotional

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*This is a beautifully written poem - the imagery of the different types of nature is outstanding -

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
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*I have enjoyed looking at all of the various poems that you have in this folder - this is a great collection of poetry!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Very good imagery in this poem - another great children's poem in this one!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Another Lilibonelle poem - you are good at these - I liked the overall tone of this one and the imagery - great work!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*This is cute and it has such a nice message for children about being friendly to one another - great work!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower1* What I liked *Flower1*
*Very nice - I love the words that you have chosen to use in the poem - some actually stumped me - great job!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Honestly, I don't think that I've heard of this type of poetic form before, but it is very interesting and you have done an excellent job using it - great work!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Rated: E | (4.5)
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*Very cute! You stuck to the syllable requirements without making the poem or the words sound forced - great work!

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*Nothing Noted

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*4.5 of 5

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Review by Michele*s Back! Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
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*Flower1* What I liked *Flower1*
*You have done an excellent job in writing this in iambic pentameter and also creating a meaningful spirtual poem - very nicely done!

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*"Stay with us, Jesus." were the cries. - replace the period in the quotations with a comma

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*4 of 5

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