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Review of The Dam Town  Open in new Window.
Review by Samuel E Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Nice tiny bit of world building that sets up well the reccuring joke although I would've liked to see you take the bit about damn so and so further otherwise repetion humor is I believe underrated and should more often be used as a main source of comedy this short comic letter neatly packs all the requirements of a good joke the final joke in that of the name is a nice wordplay too
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Review of Wanna Play?  Open in new Window.
Review by Samuel E Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Good dog *pat* *pat* *pat*
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