i really enjoyed this. I especially love love love to read this particular genre, and you are very obviously talented with this genre and writing in general. I hope you realize that you have quite a creative imagination. Some of the story was pretty humorous too. I think I'll go on to read the next bit!
This was a short, interesting story that caught my attention because I thought there would be some kind of message and for a while, you kept that idea up, until the very (surprise) ending. The beginning was so sad and the ending so so unexpectedly humorous. It was a good, quick read I suppose, though slightly childish.
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