I really, REALLY like that! Music is a language that all can understand. You got the message across beautifully. I was looking for something like this to open my mind abit tonight. Thank you for posting it here. This is great.
Samwise
P.S. I would give you all my GP's, but I don't have any. I will send you some when I get some. Spectacular job!
Pretty good! It lacks a bit of feeling, but I am sure you could make adjustments easily. I really like the beginning. There are some moments of real brilliance!
Samwise
Nice job! It speaks of sad things... It could be a bit longer, to better tell the struggles and remorse. The raw feeling. But it is, of course, up to you. You are the Writer here, and a splendid job you are doing too!
Samwise
Wow. That was inspiring. I love that story, it is simply brilliant. I was completely caught up in her reminiscing of the old man and feeling so sorry for both of them, the ending took me completely by surprise. I must say, though, it made me smile. That is a perfect ending to a perfect story.
Samwise
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