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Review of Mother  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The expressions are accurate and the feelings can be identified with.The flow of language is smooth
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Review of Just Me?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
The theme honestly speaking is not uplifting...but the whole idea has been conveyed and expressed clearly.
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Review of Nostalgia  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem has a great host of feelings beautifully expressed!
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Review of Beautiful  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem is great.The rhythm is fine.the vocab has achieved the desired tone and atmosphere......very encouraging message
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Review of Focus on God  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
The poem is a good read.It is encouraging and inspirational. maybe you could have named
it 'I wait on my Lord'.
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Review by rachel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
To whom it may concern.....poem with depth that points to the truth.Much thought and feeling well conveyed
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Review of Quiet  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
The poem has a nice flow of language.,a good combination of feeling and rhythm through appropriate vocab.
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Review of The Grave Teacher  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The story is interesting...but perhaps more suspense could have been added I got the feeling that it was leading up to something.....so personally felt the climax was a tad disappointing....but on the whole it was a simple sad story...keep sharing
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Review of Almost  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
Vanillafire....A touchingly sweet composition written by you.The feelings in it are pretty strong and can be identified with.There is a blend of both clarity and eloquence.
The blank verse still serves to produces rhythm which is great!.....keep sharing
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Review of About Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a well written piece.The hyperbole aspect in it is perfect.....meaning taken seriously by the poet.The ideas contained therein is classic,the power of exaggeration is wonderful
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Review of My Mind's Recess  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
kindly bear with my criticism...I only intend it to be constructive........and objective.The point is that I think the refrain could have been repeated less no.of times.on the other hand it is a wonderful poem with great rhyme scheme and universal thought and experience(content matter)
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Review of Man of Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
The beginning is great.The flow and the rhythm in the first two stanzas is smooth and uniform.the last seems a breakaway.....
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Review by rachel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a soul stirring poem,touching and sincere.
words well chosen and they have a smooth flow....spontaneity of thought is natural and strong.
feelings also run very powerfully throughout the expanse of the poem
only thing is the last part/line is sad,ending on a note of pessimism,as you shared that you were upset.Guess this is a
reflection of that.Keep sharing coz you have a natural spontaneous poet.
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Review of A Wife"s Lament  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very good read.The words have been well chosen.The sentiments have been expressed accurately and clearly
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Review of want  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
To R. Kingly,The poem contains a confession.the feelings have been expressed explicitly and and the poem is marked by simplicity of human sentiment.One can easily identify with the thoughts that have been expressed in the poem.It is indeed a very nice read
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Review by rachel Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
The sentiments here have been well expressed.you have shared your innermost feelings and laid them bare,sharing a common human experience so vividly.It feels great when one can identify with the message in your poem.great work. keep sharing
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