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Review by Sarah Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I really enjoyed this story. The character of Leena was really well conveyed and your dialogue flows in a really natural way.
Sarah
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Review by Sarah Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this story, despite the darkness of the subject matter. I felt the character of Luke was very well written and believable; you conveyed the sense of resignation very effectively. It was very clear throughout the story that Luke was experiencing a form of Stockholm syndrome or something similar where there's a level of acceptance to such an abnormal situation.

One tiny suggestion I would make is right before
"The police came to the flat last night and arrested Adam.".......I personally would have liked a break of some sort here just to separate the sections.

Overall I thoroughly enjoyed this piece and look forward to more.

Sarah


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