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Review of #yolo  Open in new Window.
Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Made me laugh! :) But I think that you should cut down the "teenager talk" when you say: "Wow, that like totally hurt." I feel like it distracts from the main idea of the poem and it makes it harder to read and to understand. Excellent poem!
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Review of WYRD  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
This is really good! However, I found it a little confusing. Maybe you could add punctuation or something like that. Other than that, pretty good!
-Savannah Rose
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Great writing. I'm sorry for your stuggles. Endure to the end. :)
-Savannah Rose
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Review of No One Knows  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I loved this! So pure and romantic. Very good idea and it is expressed so eliquentely. You have a talent for poetry!
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Review of Shadows Are Born  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Love the description in this. Very good work!
-Savannah Rose
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
love it! interesting characters. Please contact me if you decide to continue it! i really want to read more. :)
-Savannah Rose
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simply beautiful! I love your writing. Wonderful. Wonderful, wonderful. :)
-Savannah Nelson
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Review of Meeting Darien  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
AMAZING! GOOD ENOUGH TO BE PUBLISHED! Seriously though. I absolutely love it. Please contact me if you have more to this! I love your way of writing. It is so clear and so elegant. :)
-Savannah Rose
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
This chapter is very good and almost got my blood to run cold! You are very good at expressing feeling and making the reader breathless with fear and excitement. The only suggestion I have to make is to work on the part where the guy sees the tall guy in the doorway. I didn't quite get it when you said, "I would swear I saw what looked like tree moving branches on his back". If you could explain that more fully, I bet it would help a lot. I'm anxious to read more! :)
-Savannah Rose
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was absolutely amazing. Breathtaking. Magnificient. Powerful. You have a wonderful development of characters and a stunning sense of description. Please let me know if you have or will continued this-I didn't want to stop reading! :)
-Savannah Nelson
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Review by Savannah Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Let me just say, you did great for having such a difficult prompt! Usually love is portrayed as a wonderful thing, but to take the opposite and write about it seems hard to me. Your writing is very smooth and straight to the point; I love it! Although I don't agree with you on your points of the downfalls of love, it was still good. :)
-Savannah Rose
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