navansa13's (savannamaes) Reviews

navansa13

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#3735590

Review of The Middle Ground - Chapter 3/4

Review by navansa13

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Im so glad that I read it. Now I can't wait to read the next one! Your a really good writer and you know how to describe events with detail and write something that draws the reader in. I liked it alot. Good Job!

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#3733632

Review of That's you

Review by navansa13

Rated: E

| (4.0)

Its interesting and really portrays the connection you feel with someone you love. Have you experienced this before? I liked it. Maybe you could read some of my things? I have four statistic items and one crossword puzzle. I liked yours alot and hope you like my work. Thanks!

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#3733600

Review of I've Got A Story To Tell

Review by navansa13

Rated: E

| (3.5)

You show the true outspecks of life. Write on!

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#3733597

Review of I miss you

Review by navansa13

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I like it. It expresses what the girl is feeling.

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#3733593

Review of The Middle Ground - Chapter 2/4

Review by navansa13

Rated: E

| (3.5)

I liked it. It has a good begging that really draws the reader in. I hope you are able to finish it, because i would really like to know what the boy with hoprns and daggars has to do with the angel boy. Is that how he fell out of Heaven? Did the tar boy push him and fall out too? Is there like a war that's gonna happen? Anyways, I'd love to finish it.

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#3733588

Review of When Sparks Flew

Review by navansa13

Rated: 13+

| (2.0)

Good....with a few puncuation errors.

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#3733579

Review of The Dark Horror

Review by navansa13

Rated: 13+

| (3.5)

I loved it and would love to finish it

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#3682428

Review of Abandon: My WIP

Review by navansa13

Rated: 13+

| (5.0)

I loved it! you described the scene very well and introduced the characters awesomly.......I loved the whole idea and it was good how who managed to put background to lead up to things.......overall, it is a very good beginning, but you should finish it.......I love it........by the way, ive written a story too.....called .......the woods.....but its only the first chapter....i hope you like it as much as you like mine.......by the way, you should consider sending this to a publisher and seeing if you could make it into a book.....i would definintly must likely buy it, just to be able to finish it.