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Review of The Last Goodbye  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I enjoyed the tug-of-war in your poem. He is pulling away to leave and she is pulling him back. Short, but impactful. Keep writing!

Charleen
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Review of Green Skies  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
I love your vivid descriptive words. You paint a big picture with very few words. Keep writing!

Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I really like the word pictures that you paint and the light, whimsical spirit in your poem. Keep writing!

Charleen
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Review of Just One Time  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
Bless your heart. How sad for you and how brave of you to put your loss into words. Thank you for sharing your grief and your wish.

Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Vivid word pictures. Not a happy story but probably relatable to many. Keep writing.

Charleen
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Review of See Yourself  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
Powerful poem. I liked the way you portrayed the escalation of the girl's downfall. I know someone who is going through this. You are so on target! Good writing.

Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, you really hit the nail on the head. I, too, have recently lost a loved one, and I can relate to every word that you write. You have explained it perfectly, although those who have never suffered such a loss may not understand the full impact of your words. Keep writing! Share your thoughts and feelings. We can benefit from the,.

Charleen
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Review of Underneath  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. Short, sweet, and to the point. You paint vivid word pictures. I like that.

Cordially,
Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I enjoyed your poem, especially the last three paragraphs. In the first paragraph, "whom" should be "who". Overall, you did a good job. Good writing!

Cordially,
Charleen
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Review of Blessed soul  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
I just found your beautiful poem, Blessed Soul. What a lovely tribute to your father. I like how you expressed your admiration for him. I expected to read about sadness, but, instead, read about hopefulness...Charleen
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Review of The room  Open in new Window.
Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I like your perspective on the room. It's like time has sanitized and removed the emotion from everything in it. Good writing!...Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
I love "Let me kiss it away!" It made me smile - do you believe in soul mates or is that a myth that was made to help humans love one another? It sounds like new love that could become a long term love, but is okay being new love for now. Great way to express yourself...Charleen
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Review by Charleen Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Fun to read. Enjoyed the flirtatious theme. Now I want to know what happened next.
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