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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
greetings. I find this story to be rather enjoyable and interesting.
its got a good concepts and a rather good execution which is rare in this type of story.

I do hope you add more to it soon.
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Review of LOving Me  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
this is very well writen and ahs a nice flow to it, i enjoyed this poem a lot.
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Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
this is a very interesting story/poem with a twist ending. it moves through the sceans well and give good descripion of the character and his actions.
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Review of MIDNIGHT THOUGHTS  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
a very god poem, well writen and with a nice peaceful flow to it, a good read.
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Review of Reflections  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
very good poem, there wasn't one thing i liked over the rest of it.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
HAH! this is a very funny little story you have, i enjoyed the pun you used at the end very much. ^.^
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Review of Free  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was very good for a first try, now it's not the greatest our there, but for a first try i see a lot of potential for you to become one of the many great poets on this site.

I've read a lot of poetry, but am i in no way able to write it.
I found this poem to be filled with a lot of emotion which is something i admire(seeing as the only emotion i ever get out of my work is fear) you should try writing some other poems, or if you have already, post them up, the only way to improve is to keep going.

I'll send a few other people that know more about poetry then i do your way, they will probably be of more help to you then one horror writer ever could be.


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Review of My choices  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
for such a short poem this is very deep. i really enjoyed it.

it makes you think about who you are and who you pretend to be(or not pretend to be in some cases) around other people. the use of red letters also adds to the effect as it makes it stand out from other works i have read.

i'm not that used to poetry and i sure as heck can't write it, so i respect anyone who can and this is someone the best i've seen. congrats.
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Review of pity party  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this was a good story thing, and i'm not sure if you were going for this but it made me think of Dr. Susse a bit as it seems to be writen in his style.

but it did like how it flowed and didn'g revel much till the end.
though i think you should go back and edit out the chat speak.

all in all a great poem.
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Review of Knight of Hues  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
good. i like it. thought i'm sure the world would be different if everyhting was those colors.
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Review of Seamus & Tessa  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
very good, i don't have the time right now to read it all but i read part of it and skimmed the rest and it's good, well written, keeps moving without being paced to fast and has description without being too much where the story takes a hit.

good work.
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Review of Truth  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
this is somewhat sad to me, i'm not sure if that is was you were going for but that's what i get.

this si very well written and flows well, you did a good job.
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Review of Greenest days  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
this is nice, you are very good an poety.
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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is extremely good, very well written. you should try and get it published.

I'm not sure why you seem so nervous, this is so well written i'm sure others will enjoy your work.

oh ya, i'm scorch by the way, welcome.
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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
this is well written but sad. it really lets be know how you feel.


all i can say after reading this is be strong. there is still time ahead of you and i'm sure there is some one out there. that won't tear your heat to pieces.
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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
this is very good, sad but good. i can really feel waht you were feeling at the time. good job and i'm sorry about waht happened to you (i'm assuming this si true and happened to you). good luck and be strong.

the wheel weaves as the wheel wills.
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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
umm....may i as what your talking about?
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Rated: E | (5.0)
this is breath taking.
it's good that you rember.
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Review of Mr. Barns  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
I find this story to be somewhat sad but meaningful at the same time.

it kinda reflcts how humans act and can be crual and cold to their fellow man(or women) and that their are some that do care but don't take the chance to show it when it's given to them.

i'm not sure if this i what your were going for or if you under stand waht i'm geting at, but this is waht the story says to me.
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Review of Regret?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I find this to be rather good if short. i know it was submited to a contest that had limits so i'm not basing my judgment on the lenght.


and with this, it was very good, i find the character to be a strong indavidual for making her choice.
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Review of Cheyanne Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
wow......that sounds like one heck of a dream you had if it inspired this poem. i'm not sure if it's a bad one of a good one but it seems to be both at once.

i do agree with what people say, you would have a very popular book.
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Review of Haiku  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
hm....i seem to be right about you, i'll be lurking around your porfoilo even more so now. this is the first thing i've read but it's good. i may pop up from time to time on other things as well. good luck Tracy.
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Review by Scorch Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 18+ | (1.5)
this story is poorly set up, the main page is confusing and hard to understand and most of the branches are poorly spelled or have some of the worst grammar i have ever seen. you should go and edit the whole thing.
i will give you credit for it being RE survival horror but i'd like to add to it but i have no idea what is going on.
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