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Review of Missing someone  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I miss my grandmother. Taken away from me 14 years ago. What pain I would go through to see her once more.

Thanks for sharing,
Mejius J. Huxwell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. Beautiful poem. Nice rhyme and flow. You nailed this one. Kept me reading all the way through until the end. Keep writing.

Thanks for sharing,
Mejius J. Huxwell
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Review of The Abuser  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Sorry to hear this. I hope you leave this person who is obviously toxic. Ive been with someone who is kind of the same but not quite as bad as what you describe here.

Besides all that I would say this was well written. Great words you chose as well. Kept me reading until the end.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful piece you wrote here. I love poems about nature. And you nailed it. Nice rhymes and flow.

My favorite part: "I see the water rippling as you drink what is so free."

I imagined the sparrow drinking water from a bird bath.

Thanks for sharing,
Mejius J. Huxwell
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Review of COLD  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice work. Where I'm at herebin Maryland it is warm today. 65F Degrees
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
It would be cool to absorb things. Dreams are so weird that they are quite funny. I am on medication for OCD and it causes me to dream every night. My doctor says I should start writing down my dreams.
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Review of A Needed Friend  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem was beautiful. You have a real talent here. And a way with words. I enjoyed reading this. Nice flow and rhymes. A sad story about a little girl losing her father to war, but then gets a dog to make her feel safe again. You nailed this one.

Thank you for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of Fight or Cower  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Nice flow. I too would rather die fighting as a free person.
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A very beautiful poem indeed for the mentally challenged. This poem caught my eye because as I sit here in the tea shop tonight a mentally challenged girl with down syndrome walked in with her dad. They were going over the alphabet learning each letter.


Thank you for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of A Tiger's Eyes  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Thanks for sharing, Megan. I enjoyed this poem. Great rhythm and flow. A beautiful poem about a Tiger. You may not be scared of one but I know I sure am! Haha.


Thanks again,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of Dancing With God  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem Espero. I enjoyed this very much. Great rhymes and flow.

My favorite part of this poem was at the end:

"So dance with God in Heaven's Ball,
Cause' it's the Greatest Dance of All!"

This poem hit the spot (:

Thank you for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of Interloper  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow. A very powerful message here. So much beauty in something we do not like to have in our grass. I wonder why that is? Great poem Zeke. I enjoyed this one very much, as I do all of your poetry.

Thanks for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
A beautiful poem. Im a huge Linkin Park fan. Saw them in concert in 08 here in Baltimore, MD. I was very sad when I heard of Chester's passing. I grew up listening to mostly Hip-Hop amd R&B from the 90s-2000's. I wasn't very open to listen to other genres until I first heard "One Step Closer" by Linkin Park. This poem was a beautiful dedication to his memory. You hit the spot with this one.

Thanks for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of The Seasons  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thanks for sharing this. You wrote a beautiful poem here about the seasons. The rhythm and flow of this poem was spot on. I enjoyed reading this very much.


Thanks again for sharing,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Review of The Flower I Was.  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem about a beautiful flower. I love poems about nature and this one hit the spot.


Sincerely,
Sedic J. Huxwell
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem Zeke. "Searching the heavens with sightless eyes". A poem about a tree. Good writing. Thank you for sharing this.


Thanks again Zeke,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of Imponderables  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
I used to enjoy going to the mall every weekend with my ex's brother. Him and I were pretty close. This poem reminds me of all the great memories I had hangingout with him. Thank you for sharing Zeke. This was great.

Thanks again,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of MERRY CHRISTMAS  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Beautiful poem about the holidays. Good rhymes. I enjoyed this very much. Nice flow.


Thank you,
Sedic J. Hux
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Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
Oh my god. This poem hit the spot. I'm 30 years old. I grew up with my grandparents still live with my grandfather today. Me and my grandparents watched a station called TV Land it had allnthe classic. Munsters, All in The Family, Green Acres, Bonanza, beaver, amd one of my favorites Andy Griffith. The last time I watched classic television was about 6 months ago when I was using my tv as light for sleeping at night. I was watching All In the Family, Andy Griffith, and Green Acres and a few others that came on around that time. This poem took me back to my childhood with my grandmother who passed away in 2008 of lung cancer.

Thank you for this.

Sincerely,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of TRUE BEAUTY  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
Well said. If only more people were to realize this. You described beauty very well.

Thank you for the read.


Sincerely,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of Frustration  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This poem reminds me of when my grandmother (who raised me) found out she had cancer. When we found out about her diagnosis I was shattered. And the part that hurt the most besides losing her was that there was nothing I could do to fix it. I relate to this poem very much.

Thanks again,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of Great Taste  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
They should put this poem on the back of peanut butter containers. A beautiful in depth poem about your love for peanut butter. The rhyming was beautiful with deep meaning.

I enjoyed this poem very, very much. Thank you for sharing.


Sincerely,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of Her First Time  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
This whole time while im reading, I thought it was about drugs. The needle, the numbness. Then it ends up being a dentist pulling a tooth. You tricked me! Congratulations.

I enjoyed this. The ending made the poem go from sad to funny.


Sincerely,
Sedic J. Hux
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Another great poem for Christine. Beautiful writing Zeke. A surprise ending that shows exactly how much you love her. I enjoyed it.


Thank you,
Sedic J. Hux
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Review of I Miss You Papa  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (5.0)
A beautiful poem for your dad. I'm lucky to still have my grandfather. My grandparents raised me. This poem reminds me of how great my grandfather is.
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