This is Sena from "Prayers from the Clouds" come to review your work!
I like the structure of this poem. It's lovely. And the poetic imagery works well, I like the flow of the words. And a little twist at the end, oooh, it's cool!
I very much like the way you wrote this. It's great. Your use of language is very appropriate and works well. Two very enthusiastic thumbs up! ^_^
Hey, I'm Sena and I'm from "Prayers from the Clouds", come to review your work! ^_^
I like the rhymn scheme, the words match well and are suited for the topic.
I found the rhythm of the piece to steady out near the end, but it seemed a little uneven at the start. Try to make every line the same length and time.
It was good though! I like the imagery of it. ^_^ Keep up the good work!
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