Wow, this is really great! The way you describe the small cottage on the cliff...wow. You make it sound like you are actually there; great visuals that is for sure. I can't really see anything wrong with it, nor can I really make any worthy suggestions; it's great as it is.
Congrates on such a great piece of writing, please keep going!
Thank you for the lovely read :)
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