I agree that alot of people don't really know what love is but only say it sometimes to get what they want. I see alot of people being heartbroken with regret because of the thngs they did because someone "loved" them. I always wished this world would be more honest. I think honesty could save lives.
That's a cute short story. It could happen to anyone but I can only imagine the fear those two girls would have if they woke up in a jail cell only becuase they threw a snow ball at an police officer. I know I would be embarrasses but I hope they think twice about it next time.
I can't tell you how good this chapter is because the writing is really small. You would mind reposting it in a bigger font that way readers can enjoy this chapter of your writing. Please let me know if you do that way I and others can read this. Thanks again.
This I can definitely say is very interesting. I never expected shifters, I was expecting more along the lines of vampires. It has a steady flow and I can definitely tell that this could be a page turner. I can't wait ot read the next section and if it's as good as this chapter, I would say you have an award winning novel on your hands. Keep up the good work.
i have to say that this is fantastic, It really tells a story and the dialogue really sets it off. The feelings that someone has when they are abandonecd are horrible but when one person comes to the rescue, t makes someone's life a little brighter through ttheir lost.
People do waste life sitting around doing nothing but complaining. That is true. As for your writing, try to be a little more detailed because without the describtion, I wouldn't know what this was about.Nice writing though.
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