hello there !
I just picked your song to read randomly , because its name looked interesting
and I didn't regret my choice .
I love these lyrics so much , they are deep and I think it was written after a persoanl expirience .I love the rhythme as well , and how you managed to make lines end the same , I would like to make a melody for this and sing it ! I wonder how was your melody for it .
My favorite line is "look now ahead and try to see another way to look at me "
keep going , I'd like to read more of your works in the future . Serine from Algeria.
Hello!
I like this poem you wrote
It's so reletable , and I'm pretty sure it was written after a personal expierience , like when you open the window in the morning , and what you see makes ideas come , one after another , and make you like "I ought to write a poem!" , it's also so true what you discussed here , every word of it , people are so busy to break a smile.
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