HAHAHAHA! im a big naruto fan! despite the fact that that was EXTREMELY unrealistic (ie Shika and Temari, garaa caring so much, sakura and kankuro, sasuke and ino, ect.) it was kind of funny! well written and gripping!... Bravo! : )
I'm a big Naruto fan! Your story was interesting and fairly well written but it lacked a certain... something. I can't put my finger on exactly what it is but it just was all that gripping... i didn't have that sort of on-the-edge-of-my-seat sort of feel when I read it, if you know what i mean. However, it was still good so... Bravo! and happy writing! : )
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