This is a very moving story. It hits home with me because my brother's wife and children live in Butuan and I just went there last October for 32 days. (My first time in the Philippines.) I can picture the hospital and the woman from your description. There are a few changes I would make with grammar but all in all, the story is well told and beautiful to read. Thank you for sharing this.
This very touching, so heartfelt. It could be a mission statement for Save the Children, Stamp out Hunger, the Red Cross or any number of organizations out there. It certainly caused me to reflect on my good fortune and to think of the millions out there with nothing. I saw no room for improvement. This message is very clear.
...this piece flowed with so much rythmn I could feel it...truly...I didn't have visions of a garden...but I pictured trees with branches hanging...moss and mist....distant drums and voices carried by breezes...I didn't find a need for improvement of any kind...I enjoyed it...great job...
I enjoyed this article very much. It was one of the most in-depth articles on query writing I have ever read and it was concise. There was nothing drawn out...yet there was great detailing on the subject of queries. The examples were perfect. I was going to just glance over this article since it was after 1am when I started reading but it got my attention and held it and I will actually use it as a guide many times as I write queries...thank you...
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