Dear Writer, wow, what deep images this poem produced within my very being!. Nicely done. The child within us never really seems to disappear or forgets the pain and fears that we have been exposed to in youth. I can only hope your writing and sharing such deep feelings with the readers will help you in some small way. Great job. Shelly....by the way, could you please review one of my poems? Thank you
Dear writer, I could feel the pain that you expressed in this sad but tender poem. I too have felt like this, more than once. Nicely written. I few mistakes...you can fix the haveing to having,just drop the e. Thank you for sharing your poem dear one,Shelly...oh by the way, could you review one of my poem?, thank you
Nicely done dear writer! This one tckled me so! I use to work for a dentist. I can just se Dr. Fleming working on one of those old vampires wanting new implanted fangs! lol You made me smile...thank you for that. Great write! Shelly
Dear Juliet...what a lovely dream that you shared with the readers. I can see what a large, beautiful heart you have.If only the people of the world would care more about the "mud children" of the earth.....what a happier place our world would be.I enjoyed your work very much. The only thing that I might suggest would be to not lay the poem out in such a long fashion. It seem to take a long time to scroll down your poem....I lost my place a few times.Besides that....your message came out loud and clear....we all need to give more, especially love. Good work my new friend, Shelly
I got caught up in the night with these 2 strangers that you brought to me in this write. I could feel the breeze, I could see them dancing. A very senual poem.........nicely done dear poet
Dear Writer....your poem swept me away to all my amazing flowers that I'm so excited to see this coming spring. Lilacs make my head spin, just thinking about their scent makes me dizzy! Flowers have been my muse many times too....you did a great job bringing this poem alive. I truly enjoyed reading this write....Shelly
Dear writer. your thoughts and words touched me deeply. I too have been heavy most my life and have experience the same pain from words of cruel people. I also have discovered that I'm a pretty amazing person and my true friends love me for me. It took years to understand this, but I'm learning to like me everyday. I cried when I read what you wrote.....this could have been about my life. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me....beautifully said. I hope we become friends....Shelly ;_;
If you wrote this at a tender age of 16, then I must say this work has a deep sense of maturity in it. I heardt your confusion, I felt your youthful pain...I too have been in a relationship as this one....I can still hear my heart breaking..Beautifully written dear one...I especially love the way your poem is laid out. Nicely done!
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